User talk:Courtneyreeder/sandbox

Blackout in Broadcasting
http://infoweb.newsbank.com.libezp.lib.lsu.edu/resources/doc/nb/news/158A860433C7CC60?p=AWNB Rivari, Joan. "Shibboleth Authentication Request." Shibboleth Authentication Request. Nottingham Post, 20 Oct. 2015. Web. 23 Oct. 2015. — Preceding unsigned comment added by Courtneyreeder (talk • contribs) 18:06, 23 October 2015 (UTC)

http://infoweb.newsbank.com.libezp.lib.lsu.edu/resources/doc/nb/news/158A421E6BE63090?p=AWNB "Shibboleth Authentication Request." Shibboleth Authentication Request. BBC, 18 Oct. 2015. Web. 23 Oct. 2015. — Preceding unsigned comment added by Courtneyreeder (talk • contribs) 18:14, 23 October 2015 (UTC)
 * Glad to see you're collecting sources. You need two more, and they should be posted in your sandbox, not your sandbox talk page. Also, provide the title of the article you're working on. Josef Horáček (talk) 17:15, 26 October 2015 (UTC)
 * Did you forget to add the sources to the article? Josef Horáček (talk) 20:20, 3 November 2015 (UTC)

I swear I added them.. I dont know where they went.. I mustve for got to save, but here are 2 additional sources.. http://heinonline.org/HOL/LandingPage?handle=hein.journals/forwa35&div=19&id=&page= "35 Fletcher Forum of World Affairs 2011 Unplugging a Nation: State Media Strategy during Egypt's January 25 Uprising The Arab Spring: Revolution and Shifting Geopolitics." 35 Fletcher Forum of World Affairs 2011 Unplugging a Nation: State Media Strategy during Egypt's January 25 Uprising The Arab Spring: Revolution and Shifting Geopolitics. N.p., n.d. Web. 05 Nov. 2015. http://www.tandfonline.com/doi/citedby/10.1080/14616700220129991 Hawkins, Virgil. "The Other Side of the CNN Factor: The Media and Conflict." N.p., 09 Dec. 2010. Web. 5 Nov. 2015. — Preceding unsigned comment added by Courtneyreeder (talk • contribs) 06:41, 5 November 2015 (UTC)

I see your four sources in your sandbox. So far so good. Now can you integrate them into the article? Josef Horáček (talk) 17:59, 10 November 2015 (UTC)

The Lead
This a good lead, but it needs a bit of proofreading. "Duo-sport" should be "dual-sport" or "two-sport." No comma before Deion. No apostrophe in "Braves" in that same sentence. Comma before "ranking." Once you make those changes, you can post the lead. Josef Horáček (talk) 20:21, 1 November 2015 (UTC)