User talk:Coy Tuner/sandbox

Looks good! Now you are ready to start writing! Study the format of other Wikipedia articles to use headers and page breaks appropriately. S L Seston (talk) 23:04, 18 March 2013 (UTC)

Peer Review #2
Otherwise all is very awesome and excellent! Don't forget to copy and paste everything into your live article. Acorn Drains Cans (talk) 22:09, 6 May 2013 (UTC)
 * Instead of having the Definition section listed as such, have it as the "introduction" section that would be under the title. Then have the first sentence bolded.
 * In Definition, the sentence "Lifestyle, age, geographic location, and even...", change the 'effects' to 'affects'.
 * In Health Effects, the sentence "There are multiple hosts...", take out the ":" that's before bacteria and fungi.
 * In The Diet Effect, take out the ":" that is in the sentence "There was a study done to determine..."
 * In Purpose, what is the purpose of? Expand the title slightly.
 * In Purpose, add a "," after "...find undiscovered agents already present..."