User talk:Cpdonnelly

helpme

I am affiliated with Roswell Park (http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Roswell_Park_Cancer_Institute) and have been working since April to add materials from several sources based on the feedback our page received at that time about not having sources.

However, I see today that someone feels that the page is now more of an ad. So, I rewrote a lot of the text and removed some of the content. How do I get the page reviewed again to get that tag removed?

Additionally, I would prefer to shorten the content and develop a content tab to make our history a separate spot etc. How do I code those changes? This is all new to me!

Thanks! CP Cpdonnelly (talk) 20:46, 20 October 2008 (UTC)


 * Well, first I would carefully read Conflict of interest. If you are affiliated with the topic of the article, it can be easy for you to slip out of a neutral point of view.  (This is generally true, not only in this case, but for everyone.  Me included.)  In reading the article, it still appears mostly to be based on materials provided by the center itself.  The more third-party reliable sources you can find to support the content of the article, the less advertisement-like it will seem.  Ideally, all of the information in the article will be available from non-RPCI-affiliated sources. Happy editing!--Aervanath lives in the Orphanage 21:26, 20 October 2008 (UTC)