User talk:Cquaye2/sandbox

Peer Review 1: Hey, what you've said you will be adding our have been adding looks good so far. I see there was a section of the Panther 21 and I was able to find an article that expands on the BPP and what Afeni did with in the party. As well as talk about more of her work and what she had done. I hope this is some help! Looking good so far, good work!Mavila3 (talk) 18:39, 17 May 2019 (UTC) https://ecommons.cornell.edu/bitstream/handle/1813/13786/Cribb%2c%20Arielle.pdf?sequence=1&isAllowed=y

Hello. I think it would resourceful to cross reference the Dear Mama page to the Pop Culture section you made. Also, her early life is quite short. It briefly mentions her as a businesswoman, but what was her business?

The main thing I would suggest is to add more background information about the input you gave on her in popular culture as well as more citations. I think this should help a lot. (User:Blackhawk128716)

Peer Review
Hey! Your ideas and edits look really good so far. I think there is a lot more information on her early life out there, it's just hard to find reliably. For instance, I found this article that includes more details about her life before Tupac/with Tupac as a child, but it doesn't seem super academic (https://www.thefamouspeople.com/profiles/afeni-shakur-43480.php#childhood-&-early-life). But if you were to fact check some of the things in here it could lead you to more reliable info :) I'm excited to see your final product!Hannah-ortloff (talk) 21:30, 20 May 2019 (UTC)

Hello just stopping by for a peer review. I like your work you got so far but I do think that it is a little short on her early life. I know its probably hard to find scholarly articles about her. great work all together.(MarcosXavier78 (talk) 00:41, 21 May 2019 (UTC))