User talk:Crashcarburn

March 2009
Welcome to Wikipedia. The recent edit you made to the page Tweak (band) has been reverted, as it appears to be unconstructive. Use the sandbox for testing; if you believe the edit was constructive, please ensure that you provide an informative edit summary. You may also wish to read the introduction to editing. Thank you.  §hawn poo   23:48, 10 March 2009 (UTC)

Crashcarburn
Looking at the major changes you've made on this page, I had a few questions I wanted to clear up with you. It is important that, in biographies of living people, we get information correct and accurate, so I was hoping that you could explain your reasoning for removing all mention of the band Tweak from the Crashcarburn article. The article also seems to read as rather non-neutral. An article should let the facts speak for themselves so, for example, rather than saying "The media have also expressed a keen interest in the group with television appearances and interviews having already taken place on....." it would likely be more appropriate to write "The group has been interviewed by several media groups, such as.....". Most importantly, I notice that your name is the same as the group in the article. Because I can't really say whether or not you are actually a representative of this group, all I can do is strongly recommend you read this article about articles about yourself on Wikipedia, particularly if you have problems with the article and are the person it is about. The page is starting to read more like an advertisement, and has absolutely no citations to back up any of your claims. I'm not saying that the information that you have put into the article isn't true, but it definitely needs some work before it can be permanent. If you could please respond here, I would very much appreciate it, and I'm sure we can work the problems out of this article. DreamHaze (talk) 02:05, 11 March 2009 (UTC)