User talk:Craymonv/sandbox

Hi Carcia,

First I would like to say, great job on the information that you have chosen to use to represent your figure. I feel that addition will be a very useful addition for future readers!

Here is a list of concerns I have :

--> You have not highlighted or indicated the section that you will be adding to on the original Wikipedia page that belongs to your specific person. --> I'm not sure whether the entire piece in your sandbox will be used as an addition to the page or if you are submitting certain parts. (This could be remedied by bolding all words that you wish to add) --> There are no citations present. If you are still working on them that's great, I totally understand. --> I couldn't really make a crucial judgment regarding the content of your submission because I'm not sure what section you chose. By the looks of everything, I think you did a great job so far.

Note: If you would like for me to look at your sandbox again after you make some corrections, I would be happy to complete another review for you!

Amayacg (talk) 23:54, 26 April 2020 (UTC)