User talk:Crbrenner/sandbox

Intro

Double ‘of’

Use of following twice in a row is awk

Besides that the article reads well

Couellette215 (talk) 14:09, 28 November 2018 (UTC)couellette215

"Factbook" not "Facebook"

otherwise, good job! — Preceding unsigned comment added by Rcadieux22 (talk • contribs) 14:13, 28 November 2018 (UTC)

Make sure each sentence has a citation in the ‘Introduction’ section.

In terms of format, make sure the headings are the appropriate types, specifically for Introduction and Population.

You have a lot of good information, good job!

And yeah, ‘CIA World Facebook’… :) — Preceding unsigned comment added by Bshoukeir24 (talk • contribs) 14:22, 28 November 2018 (UTC)

Is there an updated population distribution from 2018 that you could use to replace the 2016 model so the information is consistent? — Preceding unsigned comment added by Lordakowski (talk • contribs) 14:30, 28 November 2018 (UTC)