User talk:Criccardo/sandbox

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Review #1 Very good work, you made it hard for me to find anything to help you improve upon. This page almost ready to submit. There is a ton of information in the chem box, great work on that. It can be hard to find information on chemicals that aren't so common. For your references section, there are a couple of references that don't have a link attached. I'm not sure if you found the information from a physical book or from the internet. Provide a link if possible, otherwise ignore what I am saying. Also, a couple of your reactions blend in with the paragraphs too much. Try to make them stand out more by centering them in the page or something to that order. Besides that, I really can't find anything else. Awesome work!

Tom Smith Tsmith60 (talk) 17:35, 1 November 2012 (UTC)

Review #2

This page looks really good, nice job! Maybe just compare your properties section to your chem box to make sure you are not repeating information. One small thing I did notice in your chem box was that you did not have any units for the molar mass so that needs to be added in. For your references, they should all be formatted similarly and properly cited so check them one more time! I looked over everything else, but there is nothing I can find wrong with this page other than what I mentioned, it is pretty much done! Good job on this!

Tijana Popovic Tpopovi2 (talk) 20:16, 1 November 2012 (UTC)

Review #3

Wow! Like ive said before, finding info for these chemicals can be hard, but I feel like you guys hit the jackpot with this one. The chembox is very thorough and so is the rest of your article. I would say just to read over everything one or two more times to catch any dumb mistakes that I probably didnt catch and also look at the formatting of the citations. Besides that there is not much else to comment on. Just brush it up and you guys will do great on this one! Plavnik2 (talk) 24:24, 1 November 2012 (UTC)

Review #4

This page looks very neat and close to completion! Very nice! The chembox has tons of info! One small thing: for the molecular formula figure out how to make numbers subscripts, just to make it look like the rest of the Wikipedia pages. I like the incorporation of chemical equations, very helpful. Sources are cited well! Good job!

Nicole Wank Wank2 (talk) 15:14, 2 November 2012 (UTC)