User talk:Crissinger.11/sandbox

Feedback: One of the best additions to a main page that I've seen. Nice job bringing evolutionary biology into this page and including lots of correct, relevant details with citation. Your suggestions are good, but a little unclear. I'd separate this out and flesh each suggestion out a bit more so that people can see exactly what you are trying to get at, and include some examples. You also have the same text on the same talk page twice.

Mholding70 (talk) 16:21, 19 October 2014 (UTC)