User talk:Critic-911-father

Your submission at Articles for creation: William Toti (September 26)
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Gbawden (talk) 06:53, 26 September 2016 (UTC)

AfC notification: Draft:William Toti has a new comment
 I've left a comment on your Articles for Creation submission, which can be viewed at Draft:William Toti. Thanks! Gbawden (talk) 13:28, 28 September 2016 (UTC)
 * Hi. I doubt that his commands would be considering a substantial body of troops after seeing a number of these articles going through the deletion process. The reason I made the comment is that the tv coverage may make him notable but I am not sure, so leaving that for more experienced eyes. Gbawden (talk) 07:55, 29 September 2016 (UTC)

Critic-911-father response:

I accept your opinion, of course. But the ship commands expressly exceed requirements of the notability guidelines you sent me to. If articles fully compliant with the notability guidelines are still being deleted, then the notability guidelines must have evolved in practice, and should be revised. As stated, what you are saying is that even if the guidelines are well met, articles may still not be acceptable. That seems to be a problem.

I will continue to try to improve the article. What is the next step?

Your submission at Articles for creation: William Toti (October 31)
 Your recent article submission to Articles for Creation has been reviewed! Unfortunately, it has not been accepted at this time. The reason left by Onel5969 was:

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 Onel 5969  TT me 18:08, 31 October 2016 (UTC)

Draft:William Toti concern
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Your draft article, Draft:William Toti


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External links in articles
Hi Critic-911-father

I note that you have recently added many external links to the body text within the article William Toti. Wikipedia guidance on their use (see WP:EL) suggests they should almost never be used in this way. Some can be converted into citations. I noticed your additions because I have been cleaning up articles which specifically use links to IMDB. The reasons for not using that type of link are explained at WT:WikiProject_Film/Archive 79. There is a template imdb title which can be used in the external links section of articles but not as a surrogate for conventional Wikilinks, which they resemble to readers. I cleaned up some of the article but many other such non-IMDB links remain. Mike Turnbull (talk) 15:15, 1 June 2022 (UTC)