User talk:Crocaholic/Medea

Hi Crocaholic!

You had asked in your notes for your review page to focus on the sources and if you sounded argumentative or not.

1) I noticed your sources at the bottom page and made note of where they appeared. I think they're fine sources but my one criticism would be mostly focused in the mythology section that not many sources appeared and as an outsider reader, I'd be curious if what is being written or said come from your own wording or gathered information from other parts.

2)there's a lack of graphics and images used in this. It's a very heavy text heavy piece of research without a lot of visual aid. I know in the original wiki there's photographs but for example, there's a lot of tie in with Jason and yet not a lot of art work about the two of them. I think your work can improve in adding a few more of visual sources to your article.

3)You present everything factually and without that argumentative tone you were worried about coming across in your work. I also found you have good organizational skills and break things down into their proper sections without words or notes getting lost and make everything clear and to the point. You had noted that whoever had made the article beforehand did so in a way that was defensive and I assure you that what you have added and written about this topic does not sound that way.

4)The content is up to date and heavily pertains to what the topic it as at hand. You seem to be filling in the gaps and adding on more than what was previously there in the original article, offering a more in depth look and research into Medea. You pointed out yourself you'll with the grammar and spelling errors on your own time so I'll skip over discussing that.

5) Overall you've got a well rounded and written article on your hands and I think with adding in some more sources or at least clarifying in your sections I mentioned above as well as adding more imagery, it will be a great and well rounded article to officially publish. Your content provides both new information as well as the previously written info but in a new and less defensive way and that's a major strength to your research and article. Again review sources and add more into your mythology section, review spelling/grammar and see if any visual aids are out there to bring this whole piece together more.

RavensandStars (talk) 22:21, 19 November 2021 (UTC)