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Peer Review
Hello Amanda,

I think the additions you are making to your article are very good! The specific organisms handwashing will prevent shows more detail. I think the information that you added was backed up by relevant studies and does a nice job bringing the information together. I think this data makes the results more significant and meaningful to readers. Nice job!

-Alex Kelly

Reply to Alex
Hello Alex,

Thank you so much for your input! I agree and also thought that listing the specific microorganisms would help create detail and make the importance more real. I will keep editing and improving my article with the input you gave me.

-Amanda Cronk Cronkam (talk)