User talk:Crumbsnstuff/sandbox

Hey Crumbnsstuff! So I have few suggestions that I believe could help improve your article. First, its important to add in-text citations to your article to prove the legitimacy of what you are writing about and to avoid possible plagiarism flags. Second, you should put a period at the end of "...sinless life." and then continue the following sentence to read "Napi was given this task because he and his wife, Ksha-Koom-aukie the earth woman, embodied this lifestyle". Thirdly, you are tackling a lot of topics and so when you mention things like, images and then talk about numbers, and then back to visions, this makes the article difficult to follow. I recommend that you pick one area of discussion and then detail that thoroughly. Over all it sounds like an interesting article. Hopefully my suggestions help! Kkait9 (talk) 18:00, 19 October 2018 (UTC)

Peer Review for Blackfoot
Hello Crumbsnstuff! I found all of the problems you found with the article to be valid and I hope you can fix at least a few of them! My recommendation to you though would be to maybe focus on one topic before trying to change the whole article. I think that by narrowing down the changes you want to make then you can be more precise and accurate with you fixes. My only concern would be that you check that your sources can be trusted, and if they can I would check if they have a strong history of bias or anything like that. While you may have the best intentions some of these authors obviously did not with there works! All in all though good job with your work so far! Tylergerlach (talk) 07:51, 8 December 2018 (UTC)