User talk:Crysgarcia/Spider monkey

Hi! I think the article was a great start, on the peer evaluation I gave some ideas on how to help add more and where to add the information. I think there needs to be a little more substance in some areas. I also suggested to post a phylogenetic tree for the species instead of bullet points! I thought this would be more visually appealing and make it easier for readers to understand it more rather than just reading bullet points. I also suggest adding another or a different image that shows the anatomy better since you couldn't see parts of the anatomy that was described (i.e. tail, height, female vs male facial features, etc...) I also suggest to add more to the mesoamerican culture or to take it out if there isn't enough information online, and same for the endangerment. I seen it was mentioned in the lead but wasn't discussed any further. I do think it's important information to have so maybe adding a section to the causes and effects of what lead to them being listed as endangered and foundations who raise awareness and help with that! But other than that I think it was a good article. I liked how clear and easily understanding it was to read. It was an interesting topic to choose, there's some cool facts in there that I'll remember! Gil6362 (talk) 01:58, 10 October 2020 (UTC)Natalie Gil