User talk:Crysta97/sandbox

Amanda's peer review
Hi Crysta, this looks like a really good start to improving your article. Your section on Caring Theory looks really detailed and is definitely an improvement to the current article! Especially since Watson's theory of human caring seems to be one of the major highlights of her career. I like the formatting of the four pillars of the theory because it increases readability. A good addition to this section would be Watson's first publication on her theory, if there is something like that, because it would give a sense of how long the theory has been in circulation. Your sources and citations look good, too.

I think you could expand 'Early Life' to 'Early Life and Education' using the information in the present article. I seem to usually see those sections put together because they are pretty short alone.

You should add links to the famous names in the Caring Theory section. If you can find a picture of Watson that you are able to use, I also think that would be a nice addition to the article.

Great job! Aphillips979 (talk) 14:54, 23 April 2019 (UTC)