User talk:Csidhu3

Thanks for putting your name down
That's interesting that you picked cerebral malaria. Good topic. I'd like to see what you come up with. I've been helping someone with the malaria article lots lately. Good luck and let me know if you have any questions at my talk page. Biosthmors (talk) 00:18, 24 October 2012 (UTC)

Things not to do...
Yikes! Please don't publish things like "I might look this up later" on Wikipedia. Much appreciated. Biosthmors (talk) 21:08, 19 November 2012 (UTC)

Or this. Biosthmors (talk) 20:03, 20 November 2012 (UTC)

Section headings
All your sections should be level two not three, FYI. Biosthmors (talk) 21:13, 19 November 2012 (UTC)

A trick
FYI, but of course everything is already preserved in previous revisions one can find in the history. Biosthmors (talk) 21:25, 19 November 2012 (UTC)

I'm sorry, but...
O no. Cerebral malaria still says it is due to a virus? I felt compelled to protect the integrity of the encyclopedia by temporarily redirecting to malaria. That way can you please please please make sure what you publish is factually accurate and verified in the sources? Biosthmors (talk) 00:50, 1 December 2012 (UTC)
 * Above, I said "Or this.[2]" And that link goes to an edit summary where I note the factual error, FYI. Biosthmors (talk) 00:52, 1 December 2012 (UTC)

December 2012
Welcome to Wikipedia. Please do not replace pages with blank content, as you did with this edit to Cerebral malaria, as this is confusing to readers. The page's content has been restored for now. If there is a problem with the page, it should be edited or reverted to a previous version if possible; if you think the page should be removed entirely, see further information. Thank you. Jim1138 (talk) 01:58, 1 December 2012 (UTC)

Cerebral malaria
I have restored the redirect. There are too many issues with this article. While you have fixed the "virus" concern the following is simply not true:


 * 1) "hemodialysis is necessary to replenish the red blood cells and platelets." Hemodialysis dose no such t hing.
 * 2) "Also respiratory machines or other aid to help with the many other complications that occur with malaria are often necessary in order to keep the cerebral malaria patients out of a coma." Respiratory machines by which I assume you mean a ventilator does not keep people out of a coma.

The main article on malaria deals with all these concerns much more appropriately. You may work on this article in your sandbox. Right now it cannot go in the main space. If you have further questions feel free to drop me a note on my talk page. Doc James (talk · contribs · email) (if I write on your page reply on mine) 17:18, 18 December 2012 (UTC)