User talk:Cstewart1/sandbox

Peer Review: "Learning disability or a learning disorder is a condition in the brain that causes difficulty and struggle to comprehend or process information and can be caused by several different factors." This is what was replaced for one of the sentences and I think it sounds a lot better and will get across to more people than it did before. I like how you try and expand on some of the statements that were shown in the article so that it made it a little bit more detailed so everyone knows what it really means but it's also not too detailed to the point where it's just rambling. I think all of the edits are very well written and help advance the text. I think these edits will also help readers that need a bigger picture or more of a back story to when they are reading and trying to understand an article. Overall, I don't think there is much that you have to change for the edits and I think they will all help and improve the article.

Peer Review- I liked how in the first edit you added additional information to the original text to elaborate more. I also thought the way you reworded certain definitions explains the text better. The sentence structure is good and the information is relevant for the texts being edited/ added to. The content is neutral and doesn't swing to one side I think your edits will help improve and update this article. — Preceding unsigned comment added by Nsant6 (talk • contribs) 15:22, 4 December 2018 (UTC)