User talk:Ctarbell/Antony Unwin

The Article had a very good introduction that provided a details regarding the education along with reasons why Antony Unwin is famous / deserving on a wikipedia article.

One thing I would like to see more of in this article is an expansion the Notable Works sections. Many of the readers may not be familiar with the list provided, it would be nice to expand and see a brief description / summary of the works and why they were important to his career.

One piece of the Introduction I would modify is that last portion. It seems like it would fit better as a separate paragraph. I do realize that finding enough information to make a new paragraph may be impossible with the sources found, however if possible I think it would add a lot of strength to the article.