User talk:Ctardif5/Warsaw

total: 43.5/45 percent: 96% Spelling/grammar: meets standard. looks good Language: meets standard. looks good, I would still go back through once more and read it aloud to make sure that is how you want the article to read. Organization: exceeds standards Coding: exceeds standards. I didn't see any errors Validity: exceeds standard Completion: exceeds standards Relevance: exceeds standard Sources: meets standard Citations: exceeds standard References: exceeds standard Looks good! I can really tell that you put a lot of time, thought and effort into your work! Good job and it was a pleasure to have you in the group! miar 22:47, 20 March 2018 (UTC)

3/20/2018 Evaluation by caleb26
Nice work on this. I particularly appreciate the attention to detail in regard to spelling, grammar and word choice. The research that you conducted is also very good. It was a pleasure reviewing your work. Good luck with the corrections. Caleb26 (talk) 02:03, 21 March 2018 (UTC)
 * Points: 40/40
 * Grade: 100%

Spelling/Grammar
Meets standard Good work on this section. I can see that you took the time to proofread which helps me a lot. Thank you.

For the following suggested corrections I will post the original and then follow it with the corrections, which will be in brackets.

The first part of the sentence does not make sense to me unless I pause and reflect on it. "Outside from localized urban areas like Warsaw, roughly 46% of the nation's land is actively used for agricultural purposes." "Outside [the] localized urban areas [of] Warsaw, roughly 46% of the nation's land is actively used for agricultural purposes."

I felt like the order of this sentence could be improved to help the sentence flow more easily. I think that I prefer the second option as it is more succinct. "The annual Central Agricultural Trade Fair began in 2016 and has succeeded in the past two years, such that it is scheduled to occur again in 2018." "The annual Central Agricultural Trade Fair [is scheduled to occur again in 2018, having been running successfully since 2016]."

...Or this might be more succinct. "The annual Central Agricultural Trade Fair [has been run successfully since 2016 and is scheduled to occur again in 2018]."

In this sentence you use a comma before "and". Elsewhere in the paper (in this particular construction) you use "and" without a comma. In keeping with your style, it would be better if you went without the comma in this sentence. "The economic development has been so significant that it has attracted the attention of its American allies, (and) US President Trump visited Warsaw early in 2017 to ensure the maintenance of positive relations with this nation."

Language
Meets standard Your language usage is correct for Wikipedia. I am also pleased to report that I did not find any contractions. Excellent work.

Organization
Meets standard. The way that you have organized the article is logical. The subheadings are a good overview of what is discussed in the paragraphs.

Coding
Meets standard. No coding errors present. You could add a few more links to things such as: The Polish Ministry of Agricultural and Rural Development, WWII, President Trump, JP Morgan, and/or Goldman Sachs.

Validity
Meets standard. I checked a few of the sources to compare facts and they agreed with what you wrote. The majority of the sources appear to be the type that are considered to be the most reputable. I also googled to verify a few facts and they checked out as well.

Completion
Meets standard. The assignment requirements include 5 paragraphs and at least 20 sources. You have met or exceeded both of these requirements.

Relevance
Meets standard. When I initially read the first part of the WWII Reparations section I wondered what the relevance was. However, now, I see how it ties into the overall economic state of the country. In every other section the relevance of the information was clear. I do not see any need to reduce the amount of content that you have.

3/21/2018 Evaluation by Nikki_sato
Nikki_sato (talk) 02:03, 21 March 2018 (UTC)
 * Points: 40/40
 * Grade: 100%

Spelling/Grammar
Meets standard

Language
Meets standard

Organization
Meets standard.

Coding
Meets standard.

Validity
Meets standard.

Completion
Meets standard.

Relevance
Meets standard.