User talk:Cthua/Lupus vasculitis

Peer Review
I think you have done a really nice job with this article. The lead section does a good job of introducing the subject as well as a brief summary of the different sections that you expand upon later. The pathogenesis, symptoms and management sections do a good job of summarizing this very broad topic without diving too deeply into small minutiae. There is no apparent bias in the article. I think that the readability of the pathogenesis section in particular could use some improvement, but this is a difficult medical topic that might not be able to be adequately explained using more simple language. Very nice use of drawing in links from other articles for specific symptoms and definitions of specific terms. References appear to be strong and are appropriately linked in the article.

I would suggest standardizing the use of the LV abbreviation for lupus vasculitis; there are a few instances in the third paragraph of the pathogenesis section where "SLE vasculitis" is used instead, which could potentially cause some confusion for readers.

ShakaluMD (talk) 16:25, 12 December 2023 (UTC)

Lupus Vasculitis
@Cthua Hey, I just wanted to leave a comment here because I just added to the main Lupus vasculitis shortly after you. I tried to leave most of your information in as it was very well written and you did a great job of explaining it, however I did remove your portion on the symptoms.

I wanted to reach out because I noticed you had made edits several minutes before I had and I didn't want you to think I was trying to take over in any way. If you disagree with any of the edits I have made or you want to edit anything I added feel free to do so! CursedWithTheAbilityToDoTheMath (talk) 06:41, 18 December 2023 (UTC)