User talk:Cullen328/Archive 16

James T. Butts, Jr.
I saw that you were active at BLPN and was hoping I might draw your attention to this article RE BLP concerns. There is currently an ongoing discussion about the use of op-eds and primary sources for contentious material. I posted at BLPN [https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Wikipedia:Biographies_of_living_persons/Noticeboard#James_T._Butts.2C_Jr. here], but in the past I have seen my BLPN posts archived without discussion or remedy unless I ask editors to participate, like I'm doing now. CorporateM (Talk) 15:54, 20 May 2014 (UTC)
 * Although I do not have the time to delve into this now, I will take a look later. Please feel free to bring BLP matters to my attention at any time. Thank you, .  Cullen 328  Let's discuss it  17:19, 20 May 2014 (UTC)
 * BTW - I wasn't sure if I disclosed my COI prominently enough to make it apparent and wanted to make sure you were aware. You'll see on my user page that I usually support corporate marketing departments in bringing their page up to GA status while following WP:COI. In this case I received an inquiry from a relative of the article-subject and was alarmed by what I saw, so I jumped in with some degree of urgency, before working out if a COI would be involved or not. CorporateM (Talk) 22:01, 21 May 2014 (UTC)
 * I appreciate your forthrightness, . Though I have not scrutinized your work here in detail, I know enough about your contributions here to have the preliminary opinion that you seem to be doing the right thing and conducting yourself well here. Though the day may come when we will disagree sharply, that is also true of my interactions with any editor. I extend to you the same core assumption of good faith that I grant any other editor. Please forgive me the stilted tone I adopt here, as you and I both know that your very presence here as an active editor offends some. I hope the day will come when we might have a full and frank conversation about many issues. But for now, let's be united in a commitment to fairness and the neutral point of view, and above all, in collaborative work to improve this great encyclopedia.  Cullen 328  Let's discuss it  04:01, 22 May 2014 (UTC)
 * It takes a lot of character for an editor to remain neutral, focus on content, and AGF in a COI situation. If what you say is true, you have more character than I. I fear that I have seen so much corruption in my "industry" that becoming jaded and paranoid is the only thing I can rationalize based on the empirical evidence. Anyways, if you are going to the conference in New York later this month, I'd be happy to meet you there.


 * Regarding this article in particular, it's a clear AGF all-around I think. The primary hold out at this point seems to be whether CityWatch is a reliable source. Probably what is needed is a couple more editors to provide input on this specific point to reach a consensus. I just didn't want to push the issue too quickly to avoid being pushy and demanding ;-) CorporateM (Talk) 04:56, 22 May 2014 (UTC)
 * I think that a good indication of an editor's commitment to NPOV editing is a willingness to disclose where they may have a COI, especially a financial one. For me, the article that raises the greatest issues about my own financial interests is Oxide jacking, as the business I own remediates such situations. On the other hand, less than 5% of my revenue is connected with this specific topic. I asked for advice from other trusted editors, especially since I self-cited. So, any comment or edit you might choose to make would be appreciated.  Cullen 328  Let's discuss it  05:25, 22 May 2014 (UTC)
 * I regret that it is unlikely that I will be at the New York meeting.  Cullen 328  Let's discuss it  05:30, 22 May 2014 (UTC)
 * I don't think that really constitutes a COI at all, but at-a-glance the first thing that comes to mind is that it is overly-focused on the problem, rather than the science. CorporateM (Talk) 15:26, 22 May 2014 (UTC)


 * Hi Cullen. Just as an FYI, this article is pretty much worked-out and in pretty good shape now. There are a couple nits I have, like I think "rose through the ranks" in the Lead is slightly promotional. user:Hipocrite found a primary source (his official bio) that could be used to add his Bachelors of Science from California State University at Los Angeles and that he has a Masters Degree in Business Administration from California Polytechnic University at Pomona to the body of the article. I've also proposed some better sourcing, copyedits and trimming regarding the lawsuit content here, but all just nick-nacks.


 * Regarding the discussion about PR firms, I think anyone who wants to make an attempt to write their own articles is obligated show an effort to learn how to do so well, which means they almost have to join our volunteer ranks to gain the skills. The effort I put forth to help someone depends largely on how much effort I perceive they have made, but when it comes to just pointing out errors or attack pages, I think the relationship is reversed - when those concerns are genuine and fair - the community should provide a high degree of customer service and the PR person should not have to be a Wikipedia-expert to bring these issues to our attention. My rant on the topic. CorporateM (Talk) 15:39, 12 June 2014 (UTC)


 * Oh, since you couldn't make it to the conference, if you still want to have a full and frank discussion about COI, my Talk page is always open. CorporateM (Talk) 15:59, 12 June 2014 (UTC)
 * I think that you have done a very good job here, and I have no problem with "rose through the ranks" or with citing college degrees to his website.  Cullen 328  Let's discuss it  18:22, 12 June 2014 (UTC)


 * Meh, I try to avoid any kind of metaphors (he didn't literally "rise"), but WP:COIMICRO and WP:OWN are relevant here. It's always annoying when any editor frets about the small things and just as I expect volunteers not to hover over and criticize every word I write, I offer the same respect in return. One of the things I teach companies I work with is restraint. I'll leave the Request Edit open for this stuff, but I think it will ultimately be a "no consensus" issue and in those cases I am powerless to make what I perceive as improvements while following WP:COI.


 * One of the things that occurs often is that editors are VERY resistant to removing poorly-sourced controversies and criticisms, under the expectation that they are being hood-winked (that better sources exist that I am hiding) and the way we handle COI processes is generally disruptive to incremental improvements. In most cases, I myself won't feel confident that I got it just right until I get a strong GA review. CorporateM (Talk) 18:49, 12 June 2014 (UTC)
 * I think that you have earned an assumption of good faith that you wouldn't hide sources, . As for Butts, I see no point in mentioning that the Supreme Court declined to hear the case. They decline far more cases than they accept, and that fact seems run-of-the-mill to me, to use a metaphor.  Cullen 328  Let's discuss it  19:05, 12 June 2014 (UTC)


 * Though I am not a legal expert, I agree. However, it is the type of subject where even if I made good edits I would be accused of whitewashing by an editor with a strong opinion on the subject. I won't make any article-space changes to it.


 * Regarding reputation, it is a frustrating endeavor, because as soon as I build a constructive relationship with a Wikipedian, they get banned, retire or grow frustrated with something unrelated that effects their editing. Also, we only have a handful of editors experienced in company pages and even less who have an interest in working with COI editors.


 * Ultimately volunteers can give my content a read-through, but it's not realistic for them to read through 30+ citations used in the article. Realistically I have to find someone willing to trust me and show a leap of faith - a trust that has not been well-earned by the paid editing industry in general. Any mistakes I make will probably be corrected in future iterations and are often not that different from the errors any editors makes.CorporateM (Talk) 19:20, 12 June 2014 (UTC)
 * Well, I am a generalist and have written a few articles about businesses. I don't fully trust anyone including myself, but trust some editors much more than others. It seems unlikely that I will get banned or retire soon, but anyone can get hit by a truck. So, as I said at the beginning of this exchange, feel free to ask me to comment. If I am not interested, I will tell you so politely.  Cullen 328  Let's discuss it  19:30, 12 June 2014 (UTC)

Sounds like a deal ;-) Nice chat. CorporateM (Talk) 19:38, 12 June 2014 (UTC)


 * On a completely un-related note, regarding your concerns about the Statement. Someone just told me that many of these PR agencies regularly edit Wikipedia on behalf of their clients, though obviously not from the usernames they signed the statement with. So it's possible you hit the nail on the head there. CorporateM (Talk) 12:35, 16 June 2014 (UTC)

Please comment on Talk:Charles R. Pellegrino
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14th Dalai Lama page
Why did you preserve the D.S. Controversy section at 14th Dalai Lama? You are the who pulled it on June 7th, when you said "remove section as consensus has not been achieved on the talk page". Those are your own words. There is still no consensus. VictoriaGrayson (talk) 15:54, 16 June 2014 (UTC)
 * I read quite a bit more about the matter and concluded that it is significant enough for a brief mention in the biography, with a link to the longer article. I removed POV pushing language. In my view, both sides of the dispute are not dealing with the issue neutrally, and I am trying to find the middle ground.  Cullen 328  Let's discuss it  18:43, 16 June 2014 (UTC)
 * I think we need to go by academic consensus. The foundational scholar is Dreyfus, who is cited and quoted in all subsequent academic work, such as Kay's.  Take a look at this brief academic article by Dreyfus on the Dalai Lama's reasoning.  Any section in the 14th Dalai Lama's page should be based on this article, in my opinion. VictoriaGrayson (talk) 19:35, 16 June 2014 (UTC)
 * That article seems an attempt to describe the evolution of the Dalai Lama's religious thinking in broad terms and says relatively little about Dorje Shugden.  Cullen 328   Let's discuss it  19:58, 16 June 2014 (UTC)

It says: "his opposition to Shukden is motivated by his return to a more traditional stance in which this deity is seen as incompatible with the vision of the tradition (the “clan”) represented by the Fifth Dalai Lama."

"Second, in this dispute the Dalai Lama’s position does not stem from his Buddhist modernism and from a desire to develop a modern nationalism, but from his commitment to another protector, Nechung, who is said to resent Shukden." VictoriaGrayson (talk) 20:12, 16 June 2014 (UTC)
 * That's exceptionally brief.  Cullen 328  Let's discuss it  01:31, 17 June 2014 (UTC)

How to Cite Fonds
Hi Jim, I am back at my volunteer post today. I have had some time to contemplate the responses to my question of citing or adding pictures from our archival collections to other Wikipedia entries. While I appreciate the limited role archival information can play in an encyclopedia, I do believe there are pictures and materials that provide enhancements to an entry. (I think Wikipedia is morphing into something more than encyclopedias could ever have dreamed of, really.)

So my next steps, as I see it, would be as follows: (please feel free to advise me on this though) 1. Upload pictures(with watermark)to Wikipedia picture sharing site 2. Add pictures to the appropriate entry 3. Cite pictures as part of a collection (include website that links directly to the picture)

The bigger issue, in my mind, is the fact that archives collect primary sources. From what I can discern, Wikipedia is not appropriate venue for these sources. However, as Wikipedia evolves into the 1st place humans go to to find "authorized" information, will this change? Is there another commonly known website that can act as this type of clearinghouse?

I thank you in advance for taking time to answer my queries. I really appreciate it. ShannonPeaceofHistory (talk) 16:54, 16 June 2014 (UTC) Just to answer the question of copyright of photos. We have copyright to the photos that we have on our website, so yes. Further, they are pictures of our region- examples being city streets, farming, community school pictures, etc. ShannonPeaceofHistory (talk) 17:08, 16 June 2014 (UTC)
 * Hello, . There is a clear distinction between how we handle pictures and how we handle other documents on Wikimedia projects. Wikipedia is an encyclopedia, not anything more than that. Technology and our worldwide volunteer base have allowed it to to grow far larger than any previous encyclopedia, but Wikipedia is not morphing. The Wikimedia Foundation also hosts many other free knowledge projects. Among them is Wikisource which is for freely licensed published documents. Freely licensed and copyright free images go to Wikimedia Commons. Addressing your three points:


 * 1. Pictures you are willing to freely license should be uploaded to Wikimedia Commons. We do not allow freely licensed photos used on Wikipedia to have watermarks, per WP:WATERMARK. I believe that Commons has the same policy.
 * 2. You, or anyone else, can then use those pictures for any purpose anywhere. They can be added to Wikipedia articles, based on consensus among editors interested in those articles. The license requires attribution to the copyright holder (your archive).
 * 3. Although we do cite published documents used as sources in a Wikipedia article, we do not "cite" pictures on Wikipedia per se, but instead simply add them to articles with a caption that complies with our Manual of style for captions. Anyone who clicks on the picture will then have access to the underlying license, including the source and the attribution. I am not sure what you mean by "as part of a collection" as the license will mention your archive. All the pictures you upload can be categorized as coming from your archive, but that happens at step #1 on Wikimedia Commons, not here on Wikipedia. We just use the picture; we don't organize or categorize them.


 * I hope this clarifies things for you.  Cullen 328  Let's discuss it  01:55, 17 June 2014 (UTC)

Tatyana Kozhevnikova
Tatyana Kozhevnikova I have a lot of interests, among which are politics, American history, Abraham Lincoln, the history of mountaineering, the Sierra Nevada, Mount Shasta, the Arts and Crafts movement, Native American artists, wine, plein air landscape painting, Harley-Davidson motorcycles, the history of Michigan, and Judaism. I am a book lover, and look forward to fact checking and adding useful references to existing articles, as well as writing new articles on worthy subjects I have some knowledge of and interest in. Please let me know if signs of bias creep into anything I write.

I strive to be fair in my editing and broad about the kind of articles I work on. I am a Democrat, but wrote an article I'm very proud of about a Republican, Norman Livermore. I am a Jew, but wrote an article about a Hindu religious festival, Kalpataru Day and a Russian Orthodox church, Holy Virgin Cathedral. I am an American, but have expanded articles about people from all over the world.

Why are you against? Кот на крыше (talk) 12:33, 17 June 2014 (UTC)
 * Among other things, I am against Wikipedia articles making false claims about someone holding a Guiness world record that doesn't exist.  Cullen 328  Let's discuss it  14:56, 17 June 2014 (UTC)


 * Guiness world record 2003 № 58300381 Кот на крыше (talk) 17:49, 17 June 2014 (UTC)
 * My search of the official Guiness Book of World Records website yields nothing under that name, number or description. Please provide a link to the record on the Guiness site, .  Cullen 328  Let's discuss it  18:45, 17 June 2014 (UTC)

nominating articles for the front page
Hi Jim, thanks so much for answering... and yes i would like to write something but first i think i should learn how to edit and also i want to get this little project off of the ground... implementing a more equitable representation of the human race in this encyclopedia : )

i have a little question... when i first came on here i didnt know if i was signed up or not and could not remember my log on stuff so i did some things using the ip signature...  now that i AM signed up i would like to meld that "account" together with fluffy's... is that possible and how would i go about it?

thanks, 2601:1:9A00:592:7ACA:39FF:FEB0:6D92 (talk) 04:24, 18 June 2014 (UTC)

now see?!!! i wasnt logged in but i had not logged out! this is so frustrating lol... fluffykerfuffle (talk) 04:26, 18 June 2014 (UTC)
 * Hello, . Unfortunately, it is not possible to "merge" IP edits yourself with those made by a regular account. If it was a signed talk page comment, you can erase the IP address and sign with four tildes. But it is best to leave the article edits alone, unless you have security reasons to keep your IP address secret. If so, ask an administrator to help you.  Cullen 328  Let's discuss it  04:34, 18 June 2014 (UTC)
 * As for Systemic bias, that is a real problem here. I try to be friendly to all new editors and have participated in edit-a-thons intended to recruit new women editors. But only a very small percentage of people who start editing stick with it for the long haul. It takes a certain quirky type of personality, which I don't fully understand myself after five years here.  Cullen 328  Let's discuss it  04:40, 18 June 2014 (UTC)

California topics
Hi Jim,

I guess I have one of those quirky personalities that drives people to wikimania. I don't even remember why I got started on Francis Farquhar. I've also tried to edit Clarence King, but I fear its basic style is too much like a mediocre term paper/book report. Maybe you'd like to tackle it some time. I did get two books about him out from the library to fact-check the article, but I'm not sure I want to spend the time.

Regarding the Book Club of California, I've combed through many pages of references using the suggested links (Google books, Google scholar, JSTOR, etc.), but not found anyone talking about the club itself.

Ann HarZim (talk) 05:20, 18 June 2014 (UTC)
 * Hello Take a look at Book Club of California gala speaks volumes, an article from the San Francisco Chronicle. That should help.  Cullen 328   Let's discuss it  05:29, 18 June 2014 (UTC)

Thanks for helping me
Thanks for helping me at the Tea House. Can I pop over here to ask you for advice from time to time? Harmelodix (talk) 21:02, 18 June 2014 (UTC)
 * You are welcome, and you can ask questions here any time, .  Cullen <sup style="color:purple;">328  Let's discuss it  21:49, 18 June 2014 (UTC)

Email
I just sent you an email. Can you reply ASAP, pleeeeeeease. <span style="font-family:'Arial',cursive"> Miss Bono  [hello, hello!]  18:36, 18 June 2014 (UTC)
 * You have been all over the internet, today, . At least the places where I hang out. Welcome back!  Cullen <sup style="color:purple;">328  Let's discuss it  21:51, 18 June 2014 (UTC)

Thanks you looking at my proposed Curtis Lee page changes
I appreciate that you took the time to check on the proposed changes for the Curtis Lee page that I was asking about on Teahouse. Can you take a look at the new information there now, please. Kargandarr (talk) 04:33, 20 June 2014 (UTC)
 * Hello . I simply don't understand the reason for listing any cover versions at Curtis Lee. They should be listed, and referenced, at Pretty Little Angel Eyes. Who wrote that song, by the way?  Cullen <sup style="color:purple;">328  Let's discuss it  04:44, 20 June 2014 (UTC)
 * This time it isn't on the Curtis Lee Page but is for the page about "Pretty Little Angel Eyes. Kargandarr (talk) 04:48, 20 June 2014 (UTC)
 * I don't see any cover versions listed in the song article.  Cullen <sup style="color:purple;">328  Let's discuss it  04:52, 20 June 2014 (UTC)

McKinsey & Company
Hi Cullen. I was wondering if I could solicit for your help sooner rather than later. This article about a management consultancy is marked as High Importance for WikiProject Business due to the level of influence they have in shaping business principles and with Fortune 500 CEOs, however these types of articles on business topics tend not to attract the interest of volunteer editors. The article is a bit of a mess because it is a work-in-progress (still the tags seem excessive to me). Anyways, I've submitted some content for consideration here. I don't know if it's just perfect yet, but it should be better than the mounds of unsourced/poorly-sourced stuff currently on the page. The available source material is vast and very polarizing, so it will take some time to get the page just right, but this is a solid first-draft. CorporateM (Talk) 22:03, 14 June 2014 (UTC)
 * I have read over the whole article,, and your proposed changes and have a generally favorable opinion. I am somewhat familiar with the company and agree that it is an important article. I am wondering if the other experienced uninvolved editors who have commented on the talk page are no longer interested? I know that you want to get this done and I understand that, but from my point of view, I want to get this right. So I need a little time to ponder. I work slowly. A small question - why do some of your references have a colon and a number after them? Is that a page number? I am not familiar with that style.
 * Yah, those are page numbers. I think my comment was ambiguous, I just meant that I was asking for your help right after our prior discussion, not that it was urgent at all. WP:NORUSH of course.


 * A few editors have chimed in off and on. North8000 did some of the work, but was blocked by ArbCom for something unrelated. I think Candle also helped before being blocked for allegedly being a sock. user:Edge3 has helped - he/she has done some of my GA reviews and is very thorough. Guy Macon has chipped in; I notice that he/she has been experiencing health difficulties and as a result I would prefer not to bother them. Another editor (I forget who) offered to help, but said they were busy with a new job and I encouraged them to focus on their real-life responsibilities. Drmies provided some feedback on this section of draft material.


 * Typically on a page this large, different editors will chip-in for a section or two, but they are doing so because I asked nicely, not because they have a long-term interest in the article ;-)


 * Hope that helps clear things up! My "sooner rather than later" comment was just referring to how I am taking you up on your offer to help so soon after you offered, rather than later. CorporateM (Talk) 18:48, 15 June 2014 (UTC)
 * OK, I understand. I am leaving shortly for a Father's Day trip to a museum and a restaurant, but will delve into McKinsey later this evening.  Cullen <sup style="color:purple;">328  Let's discuss it  18:53, 15 June 2014 (UTC)
 * Have fun! I've been working straight through the weekend, so I'll probably be on tonight if you have questions/feedback/etc. or need some research or material from me. CorporateM (Talk) 18:57, 15 June 2014 (UTC)

A friendly ping to see if you were still going to get around to this. I don't mind waiting if you need more time, but am trying to sort out if I should try pinging others - it's been on talk for almost a month and I still have a lot of ground to cover on this page. CorporateM (Talk) 13:38, 19 June 2014 (UTC)
 * I needed some time to think about this. I will work on this article tonight, .  Cullen <sup style="color:purple;">328  Let's discuss it  15:16, 19 June 2014 (UTC)


 * Cool, I pinged a couple other folks already, so I left a note on Talk saying you'd get around to it. I'm not a COI micro-manager (I wrote WP:COIMICRO), so I'd encourage you to feel free to make any changes you feel are appropriate whether in article-space or in the draft without consulting me. (that statement feels weird like it should be obvious, but people tend to turn COI situations into big bureaucratic approval processes)CorporateM (Talk) 15:29, 19 June 2014 (UTC)
 * I implemented the changes. Sorry to take so long, but this particular type of collaboration is new to me and I needed some time to think it over, especially in light of the big developments in recent days.  Cullen <sup style="color:purple;">328  Let's discuss it  06:09, 20 June 2014 (UTC)

Hello old friend...
Hello old friend, may I ask a favor of you? I'm currently working through a backlog of deprecated and obsolete HTML elements across the wiki, and notice that your signature contains tags which are obsolete. If you're willing, I suggest replacing:

with:

which will result in a 161 character long signature (10 characters shorter) with an appearance of: <b style="color:#070">Cullen</b><sup style="color:#707">328  Let's discuss it

compared to your existing 171 character long signature of:  Cullen <sup style="color:purple;">328  Let's discuss it

— Either way. Happy editing! — &#123;&#123;U&#124;Technical 13&#125;&#125; (e • t • c) 09:37, 17 June 2014 (UTC)
 * Hello, I finally sat down at a desktop computer and made the change you recommended. Does it all look OK now? <b style="color:#070">Cullen</b><sup style="color:#707">328  Let's discuss it  06:26, 20 June 2014 (UTC)
 * Yes, thank you. It is much better. :)  Happy editing! — &#123;&#123;U&#124;Technical 13&#125;&#125; (e • t • c) 11:35, 20 June 2014 (UTC)

Barnstar

 * Thank you very much, . I enjoy helping out there. <b style="color:#070">Cullen</b><sup style="color:#707">328  Let's discuss it  02:43, 22 June 2014 (UTC)

Please comment on Talk:Shahrukh Khan
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https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Wikipedia_talk:Articles_for_creation/Opportunity_Lifecycle_Management - Your teashop advice
Hi Jim - thank you so much for taking the time to comment on my article and for inviting me to discuss it with you. The big issue here is that nobody much is talking about opportunity lifecycle management as it is a very recent creation. I have independently observed the creators of this process implement it to the benefit of numerous global IT and Technology businesses but as yet, these beneficiaries are not yet commenting on it! So it is difficult to get a 'critical mass' of third party references. Indeed part of my rationale for trying to get this into Wiki is to enable that conversation and to remind the beneficiaries that they are undergoing a highly effective and newly designed business process. Perhaps I'm just 'ahead of my time' and need to wait until this process is widely recognised - but I would be disappointed and surprised if that was the feedback, as I have always seen Wiki as being a bit pioneering??

Thanks again for your interest - Jeremy Bassett - Bertiewolf Bertiewolf (talk) 16:58, 28 June 2014 (UTC)
 * Although I have no doubt that you are acting in good faith,, you have pretty much explained above why Wikipedia should not have such an article at this time. Please read WP:OR at least twice like I read your draft twice. Then read WP:NOT. Wikipedia is not "a bit pioneering" in this regard. We publish articles that are summaries of what rekiable sources say about discrete topics. Nothing more. <b style="color:#070">Cullen</b><sup style="color:#707">328  Let's discuss it  17:09, 28 June 2014 (UTC)

Thanks Jim - where you have directed me makes things completely clear - appreciate that. When there is more independent (peer reviewed) comment about this topic, effectively endorsing it's position as an established rather than cutting edge process / discipline, I'll return to my entry at that stage and see if I can be more successful. Thanks again - Jeremy / Bertiewolf Bertiewolf (talk) 19:34, 28 June 2014 (UTC)

Can you offer some assistance please?
Dear Jim

My article (Draft:Jörn Weisbrodt) has been declined. The reviewer said he didn't check the references. I removed two categories following one of his comments. I thought his decision was a bit rushed. We were both editing the article at the same time and he may not have realised I'd made changes to the Categories section.

I would appreciate it if somebody could check the references and reconsider it.

Thank you.

Lulu

Username: SongsforLulu

https://en.wikipedia.org/w/index.php?title=User_talk:Cullen328&action=edit&section=new#
 * Hello . The reviewer is correct about the sexual orientation categorization. If you have resolved that BLP issue and the overciting issue, then simply leave a note on the reviewer's talk page asking them to take another look. My quick glance leads me to believe that you are very close. <b style="color:#070">Cullen</b><sup style="color:#707">328  Let's discuss it  19:32, 29 June 2014 (UTC)

Hi Jim Thank you for replying so quickly. I have now checked the categories and removed again the ones I though I had already removed. If the multiple citations are removed, then my article would be declined because there aren't enough citations to back up the statements I've made. I also thought that the place to put the citations was at the end of the sentence, not after each organisation name. I thought I was following Wiki guidelines?! Thank you in advance for your reply. Lulu
 * Four or five references for a single sentence or assertion is excessive,, unless the matter is highly controversial. Far better to have a dozen rock solid sources than 34, with lower quality sources mixed in. I suggest removing all marginal sources. <b style="color:#070">Cullen</b><sup style="color:#707">328  Let's discuss it  20:21, 29 June 2014 (UTC)

Please comment on Category talk:Antisemitism
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Extant Organizations/Noticeboard
Someone suggested at the Village Pump that I boldly create Extant Organizations/Noticeboard, a noticeboard to discuss articles about organizations that may be subject to non-neutral editing. Basically it's the corporate version of BLPN, where both adverts and attack pages can be brought to the community for broader scrutiny. Except this board does not currently relate to a specific policy like BLPN does, except NPOV, V, etc. (though it could refer to this essay I wrote or something). You participated in the prior village pump discussion that led to consensus for Template:COI editnotice, which is now widely used. Although this noticeboard is not COI-related, I thought you might have an interest in this as well, in whether the noticeboard should be kept and/or in participating in it generally. CorporateM (Talk) 18:36, 26 June 2014 (UTC)
 * I have added it to my watch list, . I hope that it proves successful. <b style="color:#070">Cullen</b><sup style="color:#707">328  Let's discuss it  22:16, 26 June 2014 (UTC)


 * Thanks! I am expectantly waiting for someone to nominate it for deletion so a discussion can ensue on whether it should be kept. BTW - are you still planning on taking a look at Talk:McKinsey_%26_Company? I didn't know if you just needed more time or if I should see if I can nab someone else to take a look. CorporateM (Talk) 22:46, 26 June 2014 (UTC)
 * I think I will have time to work on that tonight. I have had several grueling work days recently. Less so today. <b style="color:#070">Cullen</b><sup style="color:#707">328  Let's discuss it  22:49, 26 June 2014 (UTC)
 * Cool, no problem. It looks like a few folks are using the noticeboard already, which is fantastic. Suggests there is a real need. You know, I went to review some GANs on org pages (I have done 20+ noms, so I should do some reviews as well), but there were only a few noms for org pages and mostly COI-written quick-fails. We have lots of editors interested in pages about businesses, whether they be fans, antagonists, etc. and it's a substantial portion of our coverage as far as article-count, but it's not a subject-area that has become well-developed as far as setting high standards, fostering collaboration, attracting high-quality editors, etc. CorporateM (Talk) 17:55, 27 June 2014 (UTC)
 * Hi Cullen. I'm very sorry for being such a pest, but just wanted to drop a friendly ping about the McKinsey & Company content I shared content on the Talk page a week or two ago. It's not urgent or anything, just thought I would follow up since you said you might get around to it a few days ago or so. No biggy if you're too busy. CorporateM (Talk) 15:40, 30 June 2014 (UTC)

Thank you
I really appreciate the barnstar. I won't bore you with the details, but the recent vandalism has to do with the Israeli–Palestinian conflict. Thanks again. — Malik Shabazz Talk/Stalk 03:02, 2 July 2014 (UTC)
 * Not surprising. I don't need to know the details,, because I trust you 100%. <b style="color:#070">Cullen</b><sup style="color:#707">328  Let's discuss it  03:06, 2 July 2014 (UTC)

Thanks for your answer
Thanks for your advice about removing the "need sections" template from the article on Michael Petrelis. After you pointed it out to me, it seemed really obvious. Unfortunately, I forgot to explain what I did in the edit summary before I saved the change. Is this a big problem in this case? Any way to go back and fix it? Malcom Gregory Scott (talk) 17:42, 2 July 2014 (UTC)
 * I would just leave note on the article talk page briefly explaining what you did, . <b style="color:#070">Cullen</b><sup style="color:#707">328  Let's discuss it  17:55, 2 July 2014 (UTC)

FrenchyWine taking up your offer to discuss
Hi!

Thanks for your feedback, which made me feel a whole lot better about the way articles are accepted/rejected for publication.

If it's OK with you, I was hoping to throw a few questions your way, viz:

1) the editor who rejected my article stated that I had too many primary sources, and was especially concerned about the materials I obtained from the personal papers and effects of the article's subject. I have actual originals of these papers and effects, so is the editor really saying that I need to get separate confirmation from the government office or employer's archive in order to "legitimize" the facts stated in the papers/certificates/employment records?

Examples:

1) the original flimsy sheet from the Mayor's Office of the City of Luxembourg stating that Felicien Steichen and his family lived at a particular address in 1946. Can I assume that this was "published" by an authoritative source?  Can the note simply state "Certificate of Civil Status for the Steichen-Gonner family, City of Luxembourg Mayor's Office, January 25, 1946?"  Or do I need to find out where in the Luxembourg City archives this same paper is located, and then state the locator code or reference information that the City gives me as part of the footnote?

2) Do I need a birth certificate for Felicien Steichen in order to prove his birth date? Do I need a death certificate location in the files of the place of death, or is publication of an obituary in a newspaper of record for his hometown enough?

3) For proof of his graduation from the Luxembourg lycee (high school), I have a program published by the Lycee on the 50th Anniversary of graduation, showing a profile of him as part of many pages of such profiles for each graduate. Do I really need to go back to the Lycee and ask them the location code or reference information for their archival file on this person?

4) Job information: I got all of Felicien Steichen's job info. from his CV. Do I really need to re-contact all of his former employers in order to get reference information for their archival human-resources or employment file on him?

5) I have original, framed certificates for all of Felicien Steichen's degrees, from lycee, through medical school, internship, and residency. I also have original certificates of all of his affiliations with Medical and Surgical societies (The American College of Surgeons, the French Academy of Surgery, the German Surgical Society, etc.)  Do I need to contact each of these societies to get their archival file locators?  It would seem to me that each of these certificates is "published" material, and that if someone wanted to know whether the membership was legitimate, they could contact the society in question and ask, based on the fact that a certificate exists.  In addition, it seems to me that some of these societies, or places of employment, or other such groups might purge their files occasionally, and that the membership or employment occurred so long ago that they may have gotten rid of his information. And what about places of employment that no longer exist?

6) Do I need a wedding certificate or archival info. from the town in France where he was married? Do I need birth certificates for his children?

7) Honors: the subject of the article was given national honors by his country of birth, and I have the medals to show these honors. I also have the URL for a page showing the existence of a chair in surgery named in his honor.  Finally, I have the City of New York Liberty Medal that he received.  Do I need to contact each of the organizations that gave him these honors in order to "legitimize" them with archival information?

I confess to a bit of bewilderment, because as a former Attorney, I understand the term "publication" to mean making something available for a third person to see. Therefore, if a certificate exists, I would call that "published," and the fact that it exists among Felicien Steichen's personal papers (or even exists at all) should be enough to create an attributable footnote, especially when we are talking about long-standing institutions like the Johns Hopkins University, the Univ. of Lausanne, the City of New York, Lenox Hill Hospital, the Cleveland Clinic, the University of Pittsburgh Medical Center, the Government of Luxembourg and the City of Luxembourg Mayor's Office.

Thank you for any information and clarity you can provide! I realize you must be swamped with requests like mine, but please understand that I would greatly appreciate anything that can help me make this a better article, and that I value your help in cleaning it up.

Sincerely,

Francois Steichen, AKA, FrenchyWine (son of the article subject, Dr. Felicien Steichen) — Preceding unsigned comment added by FrenchyWine (talk • contribs) 02:55, 30 June 2014 (UTC)
 * Hello, . You seem to have a misunderstanding about the type of sources that Wikipedia prefers, and are concentrating on the wrong things. All the items you are discussing are primary sources, and there is no need to engage in the type of original research that you are describing. As a matter of fact, the results of any such research can't be incorporated into a Wikipedia article, unless published elsewhere first.


 * A Wikipedia article should be built mostly on secondary sources, which we refer to as independent, reliable sources. The best such sources (roughly in descending order) are articles in academic journals, books published by university presses and other reputable publishers, articles in reputable newspapers and magazines with professional editorial staffs and a reputation for fact checking and error correction, and so on. Context matters. If a movie star marries a physicist, then People magazine is a reliable source for the wedding and the star's current film, but we need a reference to a physics journal for that spouse's research findings. The presumption is that if such independent, reliable sources have devoted significant coverage to the topic, then it is worthy of an encyclopedia article.


 * Since the type of sources you describe exist to a greater or lesser extent for almost every person who has lived in recent centuries, they do not establish eligibility for an encyclopedia article, and are of limited value or interest here.


 * The type of sources I described above are essential for establishing the notability of the topic, a person in this case. Once notability has been firmly established, then we allow limited use of primary sources for routine biographical facts: date and place of birth, degrees, marriages, death and so on. So, I encourage you to focus on demonstrating notability first, as Wikipedia defines that term. I also recommend that you read WP:PRIMER carefully. <b style="color:#070">Cullen</b><sup style="color:#707">328  Let's discuss it  03:36, 30 June 2014 (UTC)

Hi Jim,

Well... I guess I'm in a pickle. Speaking outside the bounds of "notoriety" for just a second, the fact is that Felicien Steichen and Mark Ravitch are quite commonly known in the surgical community throughout the world as the Fathers of Surgical Stapling. Given the revolution that stapling ushered into surgery, I'm pretty sure that most surgeons would agree that both these gentlemen would have the notoriety necessary to be in Wikipedia.

They are not famous in a Hollywood sense, nor were they written much about within their own surgical community, because surgeons don't do that. They wrote most of the books and articles on the most common operations using staples, and they performed - and wrote about - these operations before anyone else. The training they organized through their courses was also a major reason for the dissemination of surgical stapling.

Yet - I cannot use any primary sources that discuss them, not even interview subjects who themselves knew Dr. Steichen but still have an objective viewpoiont about him and his work. Nor can I even use his books or articles - written with others and published by the finest medical publishers in the world, therefore vetted by their editors - because that would be "works by the subject" and therefore a conflict of interest. These are peer-reviewed works by the finest surgical journals in the world, yet they are still not proof of his notoriety because they are by him, and co-written by people he knew.

I've read and re-read the notoriety guidelines, and I have to say that they make no sense to me. The primary sources were one thing, and I accept the reasoning there. The definition of notoriety, however, would appear to exclude a whole class of people who were important but about whose work there is little "commentary."

Still not yet frustrated, but definitely deflated. I've spent a lot of time on this, and it's starting to look like it was for naught.

Francois. — Preceding unsigned comment added by FrenchyWine (talk • contribs) 14:33, 30 June 2014 (UTC)
 * Hello again, . The word is notability not "notoriety". I wish you had mentioned from the get-go that he had invented a surgical technique. His notability in that area is established by his papers published in medical journals, and especially by how often other authors cite his work. Please read WP:ACADEMIC. We have subject specific notability guidelines for special cases. <b style="color:#070">Cullen</b><sup style="color:#707">328  Let's discuss it  15:01, 30 June 2014 (UTC)
 * In other words, being the father of surgical stapling is not "outside the bounds" but rather, it IS his claim to notability. <b style="color:#070">Cullen</b><sup style="color:#707">328  Let's discuss it  15:29, 30 June 2014 (UTC)
 * } Dr. Steichen may well be notable enough for an article - although "Father of surgical stapling" is an exaggeration (see Surgical staple). He didn't invent it, just helped to expand and popularize the technique. But his publications at Google Scholar are pretty well cited and would probably pass the requirements of  WP:SCHOLAR. And I notice he does have an article at the Luxembourgish Wikipedia. To see what a Wikipedia article about a physician should look like, you could look at existing articles such as Grover_Hutchins or John K. Frost. It needs to be sourced to neutral third-party sources; primary sources can be used, but with caution, and there should be no Original Research such as personal knowledge or interviewing people. --MelanieN (talk) 14:03, 3 July 2014 (UTC)

References Discussion
Thanks Cullen. Would a chronology of key milestones from the company be OK if it was factual and not self-promoting. Thanks Rob70.49.12.2 (talk) 13:37, 3 July 2014 (UTC)
 * What exactly is a "key milestone"? That sounds like marketing jargon to me. If an independent source describes these milestones, and why they were key, then use the independent source, not the company website. <b style="color:#070">Cullen</b><sup style="color:#707">328  Let's discuss it  14:56, 3 July 2014 (UTC)

Please comment on Talk:Roosh V
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 * I commented there. <b style="color:#070">Cullen</b><sup style="color:#707">328  Let's discuss it  02:10, 6 July 2014 (UTC)

Articles for deletion - Fifth International re-listed
Greetings! It seems that Fifth International is re-listed at Articles for deletion. I am in favor of keep, and I actually I have nothing to add to my previous comment on the subject. I hope you have time to take a look! Cheers! =P Jayaguru-Shishya (talk) 17:34, 6 July 2014 (UTC)
 * I took a look also,, and I too have nothing to add. Thanks. <b style="color:#070">Cullen</b><sup style="color:#707">328   Let's discuss it  17:52, 6 July 2014 (UTC)

Intequity
Hello Jim. I reworked and resubmitted the "draft:Intequity" article in my sandbox and added information on the "inequity" page. RegardsMdpienaar (talk) 19:47, 6 July 2014 (UTC)
 * I reverted your changes to the redirect. Please read WP:DICDEF. <b style="color:#070">Cullen</b><sup style="color:#707">328  Let's discuss it  20:16, 6 July 2014 (UTC)

Rashid Ali Malik infobox edit
Dear Cullen328 thanks for your reply at talk page and also for making edits. Actually in infobox of Rashid Ali Malik I am trying to make visible his alma mater and Military Awards which I could not. That is why I asked for help. Kindly guide. Regards--Zainkazmi1 (talk) 06:41, 6 July 2014 (UTC)
 * Hello, . The problem is that two fields in the infobox are not supported by the underlying template software. Please see Template:Infobox military person for all available fields. I solved one problem by changing the unsupported "Miltary Awards" to just plain old "awards", which is supported. But there is nothing close to an "Alma mater" field. The software just ignores any non-standard fields. There may be a method to accomplish what you want, but I am not strong on infobox programming. Try asking a detailed follow-up question at the Teahouse, or at the Help Desk. You could also leave a note on the template talk page. <b style="color:#070">Cullen</b><sup style="color:#707">328  Let's discuss it  07:01, 6 July 2014 (UTC)Thanks Dear so nice of you, Regards--Zainkazmi1 (talk) 06:39, 7 July 2014 (UTC)

Have you seen this ?
Perhaps you should write an article on yourself, given that there's this and that other news article a few months ago. ;-) --Jakob (talk)  14:25, 8 July 2014 (UTC)
 * Sorry, I write biographies,, not autobiographies. Thanks for noticing, though. <b style="color:#070">Cullen</b><sup style="color:#707">328  Let's discuss it  14:51, 8 July 2014 (UTC)

List of methanol poisoning incidents
LOL, I was just getting ready to write up a Requested Move for this title and you went ahead and did it! Well done! --MelanieN (talk) 14:07, 9 July 2014 (UTC)
 * Every once in a while, I make a bold edit, . <b style="color:#070">Cullen</b><sup style="color:#707">328  Let's discuss it  15:07, 9 July 2014 (UTC)
 * Oooo - what a wild and crazy guy! --MelanieN (talk) 15:12, 9 July 2014 (UTC)
 * Yeah, someone will probably drag me to ANI within the next ten years or so. <b style="color:#070">Cullen</b><sup style="color:#707">328  Let's discuss it  15:16, 9 July 2014 (UTC)

McKinsey & Company
Hi Cullen. user:Edge3 reviewed and implemented the "Consulting Services" section. In order to spread around the burden a bit, I was wondering if you had time to review the Publishing section. I mentioned on the Talk page that a lot of these books have their own Wikipedia articles, so we could probably do with less detail, but at the same time I'm trying to avoid the appearance of not including criticisms on some of their published works. CorporateM (Talk) 17:18, 10 July 2014 (UTC)
 * Hello . I will try to take a look. The past month has been difficult for me, as my wife and business partner was sick for three weeks with a nasty cough, and when she started improving, I caught a similar bug. So a lot of my research time has been spent covering for her and then coughing in bed instead. <b style="color:#070">Cullen</b><sup style="color:#707">328  Let's discuss it  18:24, 10 July 2014 (UTC)
 * I hear you - every time my wife or myself get sick, inevitably the other gets sick as well. Get better soon! CorporateM (Talk) 18:54, 10 July 2014 (UTC)

Well ...
I don't participate in it either. But clearly you don't care that someone is abused in public. You need to see the full picture. I hope your campaign is going to stop. Tony  (talk)  08:33, 11 July 2014 (UTC)
 * I have no campaign, and have no intention of bothering you further as long as you speak reasonably. I do care when people are abused, and consider that other website reprehensible. But I am only responsible for what I say about you, which is readily visible to anyone here on Wikipedia. Your perception, if it exists, that my comments were coordinated with anyone else is entirely false. I speak for myself only here on Wikipedia. I speak as husband for 33 years of a deaf wife and father for 24 years of a disabled son. But I don't even speak for them, just as their relative. As I see it, you lost your cool. I hope that you are regaining it. I wish you well, and offer you two choices: move on, or discuss the issues calmly. I have no interest in fighting with you. None whatsoever. I bid you peace. <b style="color:#070">Cullen</b><sup style="color:#707">328  Let's discuss it  08:45, 11 July 2014 (UTC)
 * Jim, fighting is destructive, but this has spiralled into a situation where attacks and criticism have gone on for so long that I just fire back when I feel belittled or insulted. I find the stuff on Wales's page that. There is nothing to discuss: I accepted by implication the link to the transcript early on, as you saw, which is why I find the hysteria on several pages dysfunctional. As I've shown in the post you remove and possibly didn't bother reading, I ensured that the transcript was accurate and of better standard than the first raw version. None of the nastiness was necessary. I see people still posting that they prefer a transcript to an audio interview. Why bother saying that? As if anyone in their right mind would ever do an audio interview again. Best. Tony   (talk)  08:55, 11 July 2014 (UTC)
 * I did read your earlier post and removed it only because it quoted vile things from the other website. People say repetitive things all the time here, Tony, and please try to realize that expressing a preference for a transcript is not an attack on you. <b style="color:#070">Cullen</b><sup style="color:#707">328   Let's discuss it  15:18, 11 July 2014 (UTC)

FWIW
I think your teahouse comment was a little strong. I went there to ask a sincere question, but you called it a complaint. That was unnecessary. Lightbreather (talk) 02:19, 12 July 2014 (UTC)
 * Little that any of us do here on this volunteer project rises to the level of "necessary", . Removing libel and copyright violations come to mind as "necessary". Few other edits are. If you make a major change to a list article, and then ask for an opinion about the article without mentioning the change you just made, then I feel entirely justified in pointing that out. Was it unnecessary? Yes, exactly as unnecessary as your reversion. The concept of "sincere question" and "complaint" are not mutually exclusive. I will make any comment I choose at the Teahouse that I see as both responsive to the question and productive for the encyclopedia. I encourage you to not be overly sensitive. <b style="color:#070">Cullen</b><sup style="color:#707">328   Let's discuss it  02:57, 12 July 2014 (UTC)
 * I think that if Wikipedia wants to attract and keep more editors, especially women, it should stop suggesting they're being overly sensitive when they screw up the courage to say they feel they're not being treated in the manner policy says that they may expect. In addition, the teahouse page says, "Welcome to the Teahouse! A friendly place to learn about editing Wikipedia." Lightbreather (talk) 03:22, 12 July 2014 (UTC)
 * Please try to screw up the courage to tell people that you just removed all the list content when you point out that a list lacks list content. I have said nothing uncivil or unfriendly to you here or at the Teahouse. You have chosen to edit in a highly contentious topic area subject to ArbComm sanctions. Do not expect to be treated with kid gloves. I will interact with you at all times as one mature adult to another. <b style="color:#070">Cullen</b><sup style="color:#707">328  Let's discuss it  03:29, 12 July 2014 (UTC)