User talk:Cullen328/Archive 32

A barnstar for you!

 * Thank you, . Cullen328  Let's discuss it  20:58, 9 December 2015 (UTC)

Barnstar

 * Thank you very much, . Cullen328  Let's discuss it  21:03, 9 December 2015 (UTC)
 * Hey, how did your procedure work out? Hope everything went well with a clean bill of health. --Neil N  talk to me 21:13, 9 December 2015 (UTC)
 * Things look promising for a complete recovery, . I will have outpatient Mohs surgery on my outer ear next Thursday. Thanks for asking. Cullen328  Let's discuss it  22:24, 9 December 2015 (UTC)

Today's featured article/December 13, 2015
Cullen and Doc9871, a summary of a Featured Article you guys co-nominated at WP:FAC will appear on the Main Page soon. You can use the page history to get a diff comparing it to the lead section of the article; how does it look? - Dank (push to talk) 00:41, 4 December 2015 (UTC)
 * I am honored and delighted, . The text looks great. Is there any possibility that a more iconic and recognizable portrait photo can be used? I trust you and your team to do things right. Cullen328  Let's discuss it  02:58, 4 December 2015 (UTC)
 * Do you have any suggestions? The Hoepla image doesn't show up well at 100px, and the article is more about Hendrix than Redding so the Experience image doesn't work. — Chris Woodrich (talk) 06:27, 4 December 2015 (UTC)
 * , my recommendation is to crop the Hoelpa image tightly on his face, which I think would be effectiive and recognizable for a 100px image. <b style="color:#070">Cullen</b><sup style="color:#707">328  Let's discuss it  06:42, 4 December 2015 (UTC)
 * Sadly, the image is too small to crop and maintain decent quality. To focus on his face, I'd have to go below 100px. — Chris Woodrich (talk) 08:48, 4 December 2015 (UTC)
 * , one alternative would be to crop the Hoelpa image but not so tightly, perhaps including the guitar but excluding the peripheral stuff. Another option is to crop the higher resolution File:Jimi hendryx experience 1968.JPG on his face and upper body, excluding the hand, which appears large. <b style="color:#070">Cullen</b><sup style="color:#707">328  Let's discuss it  09:08, 4 December 2015 (UTC)
 * The most ironic solution is to use the FU mugshot image that actually spawned this article in the first place! But a FU image on a FA... Doc   talk  09:42, 4 December 2015 (UTC)
 * Yes, the Experience image is croppable. @Doc: I don't feel like being drawn and quartered. ;) — Chris Woodrich (talk) 10:09, 4 December 2015 (UTC)
 * Yes! One of our more notable FAs! Doc   talk  10:24, 4 December 2015 (UTC)
 * Looks good! I'm sorry to see that has been inactive for so long, but at least his exemplary work on promoting this article will be further honored. Cheers :)  Doc   talk  06:29, 4 December 2015 (UTC)
 * Very much agreed, . Well done to all concerned. <b style="color:#070">Cullen</b><sup style="color:#707">328  Let's discuss it  06:42, 4 December 2015 (UTC)
 * , the replaced image looks great. Thanks so much. <b style="color:#070">Cullen</b><sup style="color:#707">328  Let's discuss it  21:02, 9 December 2015 (UTC)
 * Cheers! — Chris Woodrich (talk) 23:56, 9 December 2015 (UTC)

Do you have to know how to code to use Wikipedia?
I was minding my own business sucking up knowledge when I noticed something that seemed odd to me. All I wanted to do was ask why bull vaulting was now being referred to as bull leaping in all references, including the Minoan Fresco where the whole puzzling idea originated. However, you can't ask this on the talk page...because it is part of some Classical Greek conglomerate of I-don't-know-what. I am not authorized even to ask the big wig humanities authorities there my question. At this point it seems Sisyphean to figure it all out. But I really want to know. Can you help me?9ANKL (talk) 11:10, 9 December 2015 (UTC)
 * Hello, . Anyone can edit Wikipedia in accordance with our policies and guidelines. The above question seems to be your only edit with this account. I see no recent discussion on the talk pages of the relevant articles. But the purpose of article talk pages is to discuss specific improvements to the article rather than discuss the topic in general. You are welcome to ask your questions at Reference desk/Humanities. Good luck with your inquiry. <b style="color:#070">Cullen</b><sup style="color:#707">328  Let's discuss it  20:55, 9 December 2015 (UTC)
 * Actually, Cullen even following your link, I can not pass on my concerns about the accuracy of the terminology to relevant parties because I am not an established editor. ( it is a protected page) I have no desire to edit anything, I only signed up to pass on my concern of possible errors to the people who monitor the pages. Thank you anyway. Your page has the semblance of a user interface. I found others confusing and restricted to me. I cannot edit those pages, even were I to desire to, nor can I edit on the talk pages. Snake swallowing her tail. Again thank you. It seems there is no place (for me) to notify relevant parties. 9ANKL (talk) 22:37, 9 December 2015 (UTC)
 * I do not see that the Reference desk/Humanities is under protection at this time. Sometimes, a page is semi-protected (or even fully protected) due to persistent vandalism or disruptive trolling. Unsurprisingly, anonymous people sometimes misbehave on the internet. Any account which is over four days old and has ten or more productive edits can edit semi-protective pages. Until then, you can ask your question on the talk page.


 * As for your concern about the accuracy of the terminology, the basic principle is that we use the terminology used by the highest quality contemporary academic sources in a case like this. <b style="color:#070">Cullen</b><sup style="color:#707">328  Let's discuss it  01:20, 10 December 2015 (UTC)
 * Pinging . <b style="color:#070">Cullen</b><sup style="color:#707">328  Let's discuss it  01:46, 10 December 2015 (UTC)

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Teahouse section review
I have been pondering on how to reply to your input at 7:09 pm, 13 December 2015. (I do not know how to link well). It is so easy to be misunderstood if one does not write clearly and fully, so sorry I was not clear. I was not questioning your integrity or the way you take articles in order, as it is obvous that what you say about expertise is true. You are also one of the Teahouse hosts I respect most. Not all Teahost host replies are as balanced as yours.

This is getting away from my principle concern which is that in mhop the GACUP is not entirely beneficial to Wikipedia in that it may distort editing towards quantity rather than quality. An example of my concern waits.SovalValtos (talk) 19:51, 16 December 2015 (UTC)
 * Hello, . I share your concerns about the GACUP and have never participated. I have observed from afar a couple of cases where intense competitiveness led to some very bad behavior. Personally, I am more interested in writing good, informative articles than "Certified Good Articles!", if you know what I mean. That being said, I have gone through the process a few times to see what it is all about.


 * Thanks for stopping by. <b style="color:#070">Cullen</b><sup style="color:#707">328  Let's discuss it  20:35, 16 December 2015 (UTC)

Cullen328
Hello Cullen328. I find that the revisions you made to Steve Comisar were erroneous and I request your reinstatement of the acting career section. My request is based on the following observations:

Although the acting roles are not notable in themselves, they are verifiable and standard biographical details. While IMDb is not an entirely reliable source, it is used to reference acting credits in countless articles. I feel that the "22 Nov 2015" revision represents the most accurate and neutral portrait of Comisar. Please reinstated. The page is blocked so please remedy this.PediatricMD (talk) 17:21, 18 December 2015 (UTC)PediatricMD
 * Welcome to Wikipedia, . This conversation should take place at Talk:Steve Comisar where all editors interested in the article can participate. <b style="color:#070">Cullen</b><sup style="color:#707">328  Let's discuss it  18:41, 18 December 2015 (UTC)
 * The page is not "blocked", it is semi-protected. <b style="color:#070">Cullen</b><sup style="color:#707">328  Let's discuss it  18:43, 18 December 2015 (UTC)
 * Actually, it's neither now. It has just pending changes set. So anyone should be able to edit, as long as a pending changes reviewer accepts the edit later. LjL (talk) 22:17, 18 December 2015 (UTC)

More on Comisar article situation
Hello again. I did not know about any threats but I did some research. Comisar is in prison with no access to email or the Internet (including Wikipedia). It is highly unlikely he had anything to do with any threats, nor did his agents, managers, or lawyers, who are all very well established and reputable people. The alleged threats were all hot air. My private investigator friend found out that "TonySpraks" is an 87 year old handicapped man. There is absolutely no legitimacy to any of his threats and they should not be taken seriously. There is a nothing to worry about. When contacted by the PI he profusely apologized and promised never to visit the Wikipedia site again. I did not know anything about this before I suggested the changes to the article. I just saw an injustice to the article and I suggested a reinstatement to a previous revision.PediatricMD (talk) 03:26, 19 December 2015 (UTC)
 * Who controls Comisar's very active Twitter account, and what is your relationship with Comisar, ? As for "injustice", please provide a link to any article by any professional movie or TV critic who devotes significant coverage to Comisar as a notable actor. I will take all of your assertions with a grain of salt, but at least you are not threatening me. <b style="color:#070">Cullen</b><sup style="color:#707">328  Let's discuss it  03:36, 19 December 2015 (UTC)

Your opinion
Hello Cullen. I'm presuming you're up for an RfA soon, and like many other Wikipedians I too am open for my own RfA. Obviously you're an experienced editor and I wanted an opinion from one. When do you think I'll be ready for an RfA, and which sections of Wikipedia should I increase focus on? I am already focused on clearing the G13 category, counter-vandalism/AIV and CSD tagging.  The StormCatcher   (talk)   (contribs)  07:41, 19 December 2015 (UTC)
 * I have not yet decided to seek administratorship, but am actively considering it.


 * In your case, I think your edit count of 3667 is light for most RfA voters, and I notice that you have not yet created any articles. Excellent content creation is highly valued at RfA. I recommend that you do some work at AfD as well as CSD. AfD deals more with nuanced, borderline cases, and will give you experience with saving articles as well as deleting them. Defending the encyclopedia is important, but building the encyclopedia is paramount. I wish you well, . <b style="color:#070">Cullen</b><sup style="color:#707">328   Let's discuss it  07:56, 19 December 2015 (UTC)
 * Pardon the unsolicited opinion, but with only 1100 mainspace edits and only one article created, you'll be laughed out of Dodge at RfA. Fair or not, that's the way it is. Frankly, I don't see what writing skill has to do with being a good administrator, but my opinion does not reflect the community's position. Cullen, on the other hand, will be an excellent admin. However, even he will face some stiff opposition for not being enough of a content creator. Some demand at least one GA. Please save yourself some grief,, and hold off for a while (like a year), and focus on writing during that time. Please don't take it personally, but I nominated the article you created for deletion. Use the discussion to further your education on notability. Hope I lose this one! John from Idegon (talk) 08:12, 19 December 2015 (UTC)
 * I never said I'd be ready for an RfA anytime soon, I just wanted a personal opinion on when that'd be.. jeez  The StormCatcher   (talk)   (contribs)  08:18, 19 December 2015 (UTC)
 * And you got two! I am sorry if I came off as mean. I'm always pretty straightforward. You have the dedication. I've seen RfA reduce guys that have been here 3 times as long as I've been to quivering masses of goo. At best, it is tough. At worse, it is utterly demoralizing. My advice was meant quite seriously. Write. Lots. Try to get an existing article to GA. Even though the stuff you mention is what admins do, it isn't what the masses want to see. Screwed up system, but it's the one we have. I wish you luck. John from Idegon (talk) 10:01, 19 December 2015 (UTC)

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Changing the World--There is no "One SIze Fits All"!
Jim, Thank you for such a kind invite to the TeaHouse. I read your profile and was blown-away. I just went thru a mid-life crisis (52-yr old single, no kids) and came out the other side a changed man. Rather than having a job as my identity--I have transitioned to a "role of significance".

It fits and feels good. Things have been popping into my head at an alarming rate. I get up in the middle of the night and document them as best as I can. The Project Management wiki article is just one small example. I hope it can make "The Big Stage" someday. I am an Electrical Engineer at NASA and have been building rockets at Kennedy Space Center for over 20-years...but I am NOT a classical Engineer Type. Gone to BurningMan 3-times and camp with the Alternate Energy Zone.

-Some thoughts as examples: STEM vs. STEAM. Why are the Arts not $$ paid for? partial Answer---No metrics developed & proven to show return on investment (ROI). Classic Project Management will tell you --if you can't measure it, you can't manage it.

Can Established Free Governments benefit from Project Managed Change Management/Re-Engineering? Partial Answer---Yes. NASA has an open-source Systems Engineering Handbook ( NASA/SP-2007-6105) that can be utilized to assure success for agreed-upon Citizen-Centric changes.

What are the Sacred Roles of Government?-- A:  Three. 1.) Provide Leadership for an Optimistic Future, 2.) Help the Powerless, 3.) Sentinel of Sustainability.

How to Secure World Peace?--- Partial A: It can be Project Managed as a "Complex Project". The Project Manager(s) who sign-up also have to realize that they will not see the final product. They will need to be self-motivated. Global Metrics would need to be established. One metric for consideration/development: rating establishments to provide the world populace (via internet webpage) of current establishments "World Peace Quotient".

More and more....and more.... HA!

Anyway--Jim...I would love to talk with you on the phone sometime as I never got trained in classical typing but I and am a pretty fast hunt-n-pecker...Wat?! Did I just call myself a pecker??!! Ha.

Love you Brother,

Kevin — Preceding unsigned comment added by Projectmanagerboy (talk • contribs) 14:37, 20 December 2015 (UTC)


 * Welcome to Wikipedia, . For reasons of transparency, I prefer that the vast majority of my communication about Wikipedia be right here in the open, on Wikipedia. If there is a specific need for privacy, you can email me. I wish you the very best in the new phase of your life.


 * Please keep in mind that this is a project to build, improve and maintain an encyclopedia. All personal interactions here should revolve around that one goal. Are you planning to work on any specific articles? <b style="color:#070">Cullen</b><sup style="color:#707">328  Let's discuss it  18:13, 20 December 2015 (UTC)

Season's Greetings
To You and Yours! FWiW  Bzuk (talk) 10:43, 20 December 2015 (UTC)
 * Happy Holidays, . Thank you. <b style="color:#070">Cullen</b><sup style="color:#707">328  Let's discuss it  18:17, 20 December 2015 (UTC)

Merry Christmas. Happy NewYear. And a bold suggestion for a resolution.
You've had a tough December. Hope Christmas brings you joy and happiness, and the new year, prosperity and good health.

Of all the mere mortal editors I deal with regularly, you are far and away the most qualified to have a mop. Please do the project a favor and go get it. For you, RfA will be a mere formality. John from Idegon (talk) 07:23, 21 December 2015 (UTC)


 * Thank you for your kind words which I take to heart, . I appreciate it, and wish you the happiest of holidays. <b style="color:#070">Cullen</b><sup style="color:#707">328  Let's discuss it  07:48, 21 December 2015 (UTC)

Holiday Greetings
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 * Use {{subst:Season's Greetings}} to send this message <span style="text-shadow: 4px 4px 15px #FF9900, -4px -4px 15px #FF0099;"><b style="color:#0000FF;">VictoriaGrayson</b><b style="font-family:Helvetica Neue;color:#707">Talk</b> 02:16, 21 December 2015 (UTC)
 * Thank you and Happy Holidays to you, . The old photo of the snowshoes reminds me that I used to trudge through the wilderness that way, back when I was a lot younger. Oh wait, now I remember that I used snowshoes when I climbed a peak in the Adirondacks about 12 years ago. <b style="color:#070">Cullen</b><sup style="color:#707">328  Let's discuss it  07:58, 21 December 2015 (UTC)

Best wishes for the holidays...

 * Thank you for bringing art and beauty to my talk page, . I wish you a very happy 2016. <b style="color:#070">Cullen</b><sup style="color:#707">328  Let's discuss it  01:42, 24 December 2015 (UTC)

78.26's RFA Appreciation award

 * You are very welcome,, and thank you for your willingness to help the encyclopedia in new ways. <b style="color:#070">Cullen</b><sup style="color:#707">328  Let's discuss it  01:40, 24 December 2015 (UTC)
 * Likewise. I have not commented at the RfA poll page because I had an active RfA, but I join those who sincerely hope you also run for admin.  I think you would do an exemplary job, much better than I will ever do.  Of course, you need to do that when the time is right for you, but I would enthusiastically endorse it.   <font color="008B8B">78.26  (spin me / revolutions) 01:44, 24 December 2015 (UTC)
 * Thank you, . This is a matter that I will be discussing with my wife and considering very carefully. I am well aware that a lot of people want me to step forward, but it has to be right for my family. <b style="color:#070">Cullen</b><sup style="color:#707">328  Let's discuss it  01:49, 24 December 2015 (UTC)
 * I understand, which is why I mentioned the part about when it is right for you. So... when it is the right time for you and your family, it will most certainly be the right time for Wikipedia.  All the best, Happy Holidays, and Merry New Year!   <font color="008B8B">78.26  (spin me / revolutions) 01:50, 24 December 2015 (UTC)

Season's Greetings

 * Thanks, and Happy New Year to you, . What's that he's holding? My guess is that it is a gift wrapped bottle of whiskey. <b style="color:#070">Cullen</b><sup style="color:#707">328  Let's discuss it  22:26, 24 December 2015 (UTC)

Merry Christmas

 * Thanks, and Happy Holidays to you, . <b style="color:#070">Cullen</b><sup style="color:#707">328  Let's discuss it  23:32, 24 December 2015 (UTC)

Arbitration enforcement 2 case closed
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Happy Holidays!
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Wishing you a happy holiday season and a Merry Christmas. May your new year be happy and prosperous. ~ Super  Hamster  Talk Contribs 01:41, 26 December 2015 (UTC)
 * Same to you! It is always nice to hear from . <b style="color:#070">Cullen</b><sup style="color:#707">328  Let's discuss it  01:46, 26 December 2015 (UTC)

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Rubbish computer (Merry Christmas!: ...And a Happy New Year!) is wishing you a Merry Christmas! This greeting (and season) promotes WikiLove and hopefully this note has made your day a little better. Spread the WikiLove by wishing another user a Merry Christmas, whether it be someone you have had disagreements with in the past, a good friend, or just some random person. Happy New Year!

Spread the cheer by adding {{subst:Xmas2}} to their talk page with a friendly message. Rubbish computer (Merry Christmas!: ...And a Happy New Year!) 15:56, 26 December 2015 (UTC)
 * Thanks, and a Happy New Year to you, . <b style="color:#070">Cullen</b><sup style="color:#707">328  Let's discuss it  16:33, 26 December 2015 (UTC)

Please comment on Talk:David L. Jones
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Hi
Sorry to bother you again, only I recently got into a minor dispute with an editor. In the heat of the moment I added a tag to my userpage, and the user used the thanks action to thank me for doing this. Is this serious, or should I just ignore it? I think I've messed up in terms of the dispute, but I'll just leave it for a while in terms of that. Thanks, --Rubbish computer (Merry Christmas!: ...And a Happy New Year!) 02:53, 27 December 2015 (UTC)
 * I suggest that you do the following: Remove the "retired" banner from your userpage with an edit summary saying that you got a bit too emotional, or something similar. And do your very best to ignore the other editor and anything they do for about a week. Or more, if possible. <b style="color:#070">Cullen</b><sup style="color:#707">328  Let's discuss it  02:57, 27 December 2015 (UTC)
 * I've already removed it. Thanks again for the great advice. --Rubbish computer (Merry Christmas!: ...And a Happy New Year!) 03:00, 27 December 2015 (UTC)

Lawrence Gwozdz
Hello, When you have a chance, I'd like to discuss on the WP:BLPN. I posted a question there in response to your response to the subject of the article. There is no rush since I'm sure this time of year you are busy off WP, as am I, but I just wanted to make sure you were aware of it. Thanks, TheBlinkster (talk) 16:40, 27 December 2015 (UTC) Edited the above to repair a misspelling (sorry, on my first cup of coffee). TheBlinkster (talk) 16:41, 27 December 2015 (UTC)
 * I commented at the Biographies of living people noticeboard. <b style="color:#070">Cullen</b><sup style="color:#707">328  Let's discuss it  01:31, 28 December 2015 (UTC)

Teahouse conversation extended- Pat Larter page
Hello, Thanks for your reply on my question in the teahouse-I am a rookie at Wikipedia so can't work out how to reply there (is that possible!?)

I am still trying to work out what exactly is wrong with my references for my page on Pat Larter? I have a book, an exhibition catalogue, and online journal, and a newspaper article included in the reference list-which are reputable independent published sources (so far as I am aware In the art word in Australia they certainly are!) I have quoted from these sources in the article with quotation marks.

Also out of curiosity who decides if sources are reputable? and how many sources does an article need to have?

I see what you mean about the length of the article- it is important I think that people can see the exhibition she was in so they can research further- is there a way to do this by attaching the information as a pdf or something?

Thanks for taking the time to help!

Daniellehakim (talk) 03:01, 21 December 2015 (UTC)
 * Hello, . I will give you a frank answer based not only on policies and guidelines, but also on my impressions and hunches based on long experience here, including work on quite a few artist biographies. First, every edit you make should be devoted to demonstrating that she meets our notability guideline WP:ARTIST, based on what  the reliable sources say. There is no "magic number" of sources, but I will say without hesitation that three high quality sources are superior to ten mediocre sources. One book source from a university press devoting five pages of significant coverage to an artist is superior to twenty trivial passing mentions in a variety of local newspapers. When writing a new article, a short, tightly focused and well referenced biography is far superior to a sprawling disorganized curriculum vitae crammed full of unreferenced assertions.


 * When I look at your entirely unreferenced Exhibitions section, I see "Watters . . . Legge . . . Watters . . . Legge . . . Legge". Of what significance or use is it to the reader of the encyclopedia that her work was exhibited in those galleries so many times, when there is no critical commentary and no references to reliable sources? And then I notice that the most impressive exhibitions are in her husband's name, as is the book source.


 * Similarly for the Publications section. Presumably, these publications mention her. But if they are not being used as references to support assertions in the article, they simply do not belong in the article. They contribute nothing except bloat.


 * The Collections section could contribute to notability big time. But it is unreferenced, provoking skepticism from a reviewer and bewilderment from the reader.


 * I recommend that you start by ruthlessly eliminating every single unreferenced phrase, sentence or list item from your draft. Leave only material that accurately summarizes what your cited reliable sources say. If you want to add anything back in, then add a reference that backs it up. The result will be a lean, well referenced encyclopedia article.


 * You might want to take a look at biography of a photographer I wrote, Cedric Wright. I think that you will see that the references support every assertion about him in the article. It took a long time to research and write this article, but I am confident that it is solid. <b style="color:#070">Cullen</b><sup style="color:#707">328  Let's discuss it  05:31, 21 December 2015 (UTC)

Hello, Thanks again for taking the time to respond and for the explanation. Yes the problem for most of her career is that her exhibitions were often asides to her husbands work- and she has not had a monograph published on her own artwork (that I am aware of) or many solo institutional exhibitions dedicated to her work. This does not mean she is not notable but is reflective of a general trend in the art world to highlight works by male artists. See Guerrilla Girls or CoUNTess also the reason I am writing articles in the first place- to write women into art history.

I do understand what you mean about making the article shorter and adding more references but is it not also helpful for researchers to see her exhibition history? Books do often publish artists CVs I know that at the moment my article is unreferenced where it could be but isn't the point of wikipedia that it can be improved by other users so if someone were to see my article they could help complete links add more information?

I have since improved my article. Wikipedia itself says in the introduction that "Wikipedia is allowed to be imperfect". I still don't see the reason why it should not be published as it was? As it were published someone else might see it and want to improve it! I did add some more references however links to collections/articles are tricky as not all are online...and I don't have access to some books which I need to go to libraries to borrow.

Hopefully now it is now able to be published.

Daniellehakim (talk) 04:18, 28 December 2015 (UTC)
 * Hello again, . I took a look at some of the higher numbered references that I did not recognize, and they are of high quality and establish notability in my opinion. I still find the lengthy unreferenced lists to be disconcerting and unencyclopedic. You comment "is it not also helpful for researchers to see her exhibition history?". Maybe that would be appropriate for a monograph where original research is not only allowed but encouraged. Here on Wikipedia, we simply do not publish original research. So, I again advise you to either reference this material or remove it. You can expand the article at any time in the future by summarizing any new reliable sources that you discover. Wikipedia is not a substitute for books or monographs. It is a tertiary reference work which summarizes what published secondary sources says. You are correct that we do not expect perfection, but you have chosen to use the Articles for Creation process, and so you need to convince an AfC reviewer that your draft article is ready for the encyclopedia. My suggestions are intended solely to make that more likely. Happy New Year to you. <b style="color:#070">Cullen</b><sup style="color:#707">328  Let's discuss it  05:06, 28 December 2015 (UTC)

Rick Alan Ross (consultant) bio
I have been told conflicting things by various editors and through rulings and arbitration at Wikipedia. I have been specifically told to make editing suggestions at the Talk page of my bio, but that I cannot edit the bio myself. I have been repeatedly asked by Wikipedia editors to offer edits so they can see how I think a sentence, paragraph or section should read. This is what I have been told and I have also followed the advice of editors who told me learn Wikipedia policy to inform my edit requests and comments. Historically, you should know that I requested that my bio be deleted. This was rejected as was another deletion request by an editor just recently. You should also know that an editor of my bio named Jossi was banned from Wikipedia when it was established that he was employed by Prem Rewat, a guru known as cult leader. As you may know several Scientologists have also been banned from editing at Wikipedia. So there has been a historical problem with my bio being abused by sock puppets. Having said that my intent is to work within the parameters of Wikipedia policy as instructed. I have no intention of becoming the editor of my own bio, which is explicitly prohibited. But I do want the bio to be acurate, without undue weight being given to one thing or another, free of fringe theories, tiny minority opinions and not something used as a soapbox.Rick Alan Ross (talk) 16:27, 29 December 2015 (UTC) I have expressed my opinion on the article's talk page, and my opinion remains the same. I believe that your attempt to rewrite the lead in your own words is a big mistake that is alienating your allies. <b style="color:#070">Cullen</b><sup style="color:#707">328  Let's discuss it  18:06, 29 December 2015 (UTC)

Draft:Tup Tup Palace
Hi Jim,

I hope you enjoyed the festive period. Following your advice at the Teahouse, i.e "The problem is that the sources describing these visits discuss altercations rather than the club itself, Laurahartley. The best sources would be those that devote significant coverage to the nightclub as a business venture rather than celebrities who got into scrapes there", I have made some changes that I hope meet with your approval: Re: Kanye West, I have deleted 6 references, retaining 1. Re: Leon Best and Stephen Ireland, I have deleted 4 references, retaining 2. Re: Tulisa Contostavlos, I have deleted 1 reference, retaining 1. I have taken care to ensure that these references are third party reliable sources that are independent of the subject. I am confident that the notability of the venue is well established regardless, but I believe that such references are also useful in terms of establishing the depth of coverage and the audience. To paraphrase Notability (organizations and companies); ''"If the depth of coverage is not substantial, then multiple[2] independent sources should be cited to establish notability." "The source's audience must also be considered. Evidence of significant coverage by international or national, or at least regional, media is a strong indication of notability."''

Thanks again for your help thus far.

Laurahartley (talk) 15:28, 28 December 2015 (UTC)
 * If you think you have adequately addressed the concerns of the reviewer, then you should resubmit the draft for another review, . Good luck. <b style="color:#070">Cullen</b><sup style="color:#707">328  Let's discuss it  18:23, 29 December 2015 (UTC)

Broken template
Hi Cullen328, please check Special:Diff/697506955 - you appear to be making a bunch of these without closing the tables. Please go back and fix any others that are broken. Happy editing, — xaosflux  Talk 23:35, 30 December 2015 (UTC)
 * Thanks for the heads up, . I think I have fixed them all. <b style="color:#070">Cullen</b><sup style="color:#707">328  Let's discuss it  01:12, 31 December 2015 (UTC)

Happy New Year
Happy New Year to you too! Did you know that on this date in 1905 the Wikipedia article for Albert Einstein was speedily deleted under A7 on the grounds that being a Swiss patent clerk is not a sufficient claim of importance or significance ;) —teb728 t c 00:29, 31 December 2015 (UTC)
 * Yeah, that was right around the time that Wright Brothers was deleted. It seems that they were non-notable bicycle mechanics involved with some unpublished original flying machine research in North Carolina,, and not a single reliable source had a word to say about it. <b style="color:#070">Cullen</b><sup style="color:#707">328  Let's discuss it  01:17, 31 December 2015 (UTC)

Those pesky brackets ...
I've done the same (with mass messages, no less :-)), and didn't even notice. Thanks, and Happy New Year (again)! All the best,  Mini  apolis  02:47, 31 December 2015 (UTC)
 * Well, correcting about 30 of them has burned it into my 63 year old brain,, at least for a month or two. <b style="color:#070">Cullen</b><sup style="color:#707">328  Let's discuss it  02:49, 31 December 2015 (UTC)

I forgot to ping you
FYI... I mentioned you here. Viriditas (talk) 02:57, 31 December 2015 (UTC)
 * I commented there,, and am very grateful for your remark. <b style="color:#070">Cullen</b><sup style="color:#707">328  Let's discuss it  04:00, 31 December 2015 (UTC)

Best wishes for 2016 . ..
Cullen, may you continue to make Wikipedia a better place in the New Year. Cheers. Dirtlawyer1 (talk) 03:58, 31 December 2015 (UTC)
 * Thank you, . I left some clip art and an attempt at humor on your talk page. <b style="color:#070">Cullen</b><sup style="color:#707">328  Let's discuss it  04:07, 31 December 2015 (UTC)

Holiday Greetings

 * Thank you, . Since I had Mohs surgery on my right ear 13 days ago, and had the stitches removed today, I just love all holiday greetings about ears. <b style="color:#070">Cullen</b><sup style="color:#707">328  Let's discuss it  04:10, 31 December 2015 (UTC)


 * That one take the prize for best Happy New Year wish I've seen!  Montanabw <sup style="color:purple;">(talk)  06:03, 31 December 2015 (UTC)

Happy New Year!
Wishing you a happy new year! Garagepunk66 (talk) 08:06, 31 December 2015 (UTC)
 * Thsnks, . I love the photos on your user pages. Very cool. <b style="color:#070">Cullen</b><sup style="color:#707">328  Let's discuss it  08:08, 31 December 2015 (UTC)


 * Thanks. Garagepunk66 (talk) 08:11, 31 December 2015 (UTC)

Per your and others request
Best Doc James  (talk · contribs · email) 01:18, 2 January 2016 (UTC)
 * Thank you for making a statement, . I intend to work for greater WMF transparency in 2016, and look forward to cooperating with you. <b style="color:#070">Cullen</b><sup style="color:#707">328  Let's discuss it  01:42, 2 January 2016 (UTC)

Happy New Year 2016!

 * And ping. --Rosiestep (talk) 21:14, 30 December 2015 (UTC)
 * Thanks, . Just for that, you are the first recipient of my New Years greeting. <b style="color:#070">Cullen</b><sup style="color:#707">328  Let's discuss it  22:26, 30 December 2015 (UTC)
 * In case you didn't see it or didn't get it, I emailed you on 30 December. Please let me know if I should resend? --Rosiestep (talk) 03:53, 2 January 2016 (UTC)


 * I apologize for not noticing your email among the New Year's deluge, . I have responded. <b style="color:#070">Cullen</b><sup style="color:#707">328  Let's discuss it  04:10, 2 January 2016 (UTC)

editors wrote Good Articles with axes, hammers and chisels?

 * 'Yeah, Good Old Days, those were. Hafspajen (talk) 22:35, 30 December 2015 (UTC)


 * Things were so calm and peaceful that the waterfowl were not freaking out with humans close at hand, . <b style="color:#070">Cullen</b><sup style="color:#707">328  Let's discuss it  04:13, 2 January 2016 (UTC)

Happy New Year Cullen328!
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Happy New Year! Cullen328, Have a prosperous, productive and enjoyable New Year, and thanks for your contributions to Wikipedia.  Mini  apolis  23:21, 30 December 2015 (UTC)

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 * Thank you, . <b style="color:#070">Cullen</b><sup style="color:#707">328  Let's discuss it  04:15, 2 January 2016 (UTC)

Happy New Year

 * Your kind words and mercy mean a lot to me, . <b style="color:#070">Cullen</b><sup style="color:#707">328   Let's discuss it  04:23, 2 January 2016 (UTC)

Happy New Year Cullen328!
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Happy New Year! Cullen328, Have a prosperous, productive and enjoyable New Year, and thanks for your contributions to Wikipedia. Poepkop (talk) 14:12, 31 December 2015 (UTC)

Send New Year cheer by adding {{subst:Happy New Year 2016}} to user talk pages. .
 * Thanks, and have a great year, . <b style="color:#070">Cullen</b><sup style="color:#707">328  Let's discuss it  04:25, 2 January 2016 (UTC)

Happy New Year Cullen328!
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Happy New Year! Cullen328, Have a prosperous, productive and enjoyable New Year, and thanks for your contributions to Wikipedia. Tito Dutta (talk) 18:55, 31 December 2015 (UTC)

Send New Year cheer by adding {{subst:Happy New Year 2016}} to user talk pages.
 * Thanks, and it is great to hear from you, . <b style="color:#070">Cullen</b><sup style="color:#707">328  Let's discuss it  04:28, 2 January 2016 (UTC)

2016

 * Spread the WikiLove; use {{subst:Happy New Year elves}} to send this message
 * Thanks for the "regifting", . Did I create a meme? <b style="color:#070">Cullen</b><sup style="color:#707">328  Let's discuss it  04:36, 2 January 2016 (UTC)

2016 II

 * Spread the WikiLove; use {{subst:Happy New Year elves}} to send this message


 * Spread the WikiLove; use {{subst:Happy New Year elves}} to send this message
 * Oh, no, not you too, ? You have better taste than to spread my bad jokes around. <b style="color:#070">Cullen</b><sup style="color:#707">328  Let's discuss it  04:37, 2 January 2016 (UTC)

Happy New Year
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Happy New Year! Have a prosperous, productive and enjoyable New Year, and thanks for your contributions to Wikipedia. Quis separabit? 21:54, 31 December 2015 (UTC)
 * Thank you so much. It is always nice to receive some "hot mail", . <b style="color:#070">Cullen</b><sup style="color:#707">328  Let's discuss it  04:40, 2 January 2016 (UTC)

Happy New Year, Cullen328!
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Happy New Year! Cullen328, Have a prosperous, productive and enjoyable New Year, and thanks for your contributions to Wikipedia. Rubbish computer (Merry Christmas!: ...And a Happy New Year!) 22:59, 31 December 2015 (UTC)


 * Send New Year cheer by adding {{subst:Happy New Year fireworks}} to user talk pages.


 * Thanks so much, . I was hoping that maybe Santa might have brought you a better computer, but so it goes. <b style="color:#070">Cullen</b><sup style="color:#707">328  Let's discuss it  04:42, 2 January 2016 (UTC)

Happy New Year, Cullen328!
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Happy New Year! Cullen328, Have a prosperous, productive and enjoyable New Year, and thanks for your contributions to Wikipedia. Tokyogirl79 (｡◕‿◕｡)  10:38, 1 January 2016 (UTC)


 * Send New Year cheer by adding {{subst:Happy New Year fireworks}} to user talk pages.


 * Thank you, . Every time I read the smart things you say, I want to drink some sake and eat some sushi. <b style="color:#070">Cullen</b><sup style="color:#707">328  Let's discuss it  04:45, 2 January 2016 (UTC)

Happy New Year, Cullen328
<div style="border-style:solid; border-color:gold; background-color:lightblue; font color:gray; border-width:2px; text-align:left; padding:8px;" class="plainlinks">  Pr at yya  (Hello!) — is wishing you a  Happy New Year ! Welcome the <font style="white-space:nowrap;text-shadow:green 0em 0em 0.8em,red -0.8em -0.8em 0.9em,blue 0.7em 0.7em 0.8em;color:#000000"> 2016 . Wishing you a happy and fruitful 2016 with good health and your wishes come true! This greeting (and season) promotes WikiLove and hopefully this note has made your day a little better. Spread the WikiLove by wishing another user a Happy New Year, whether it be someone you have had disagreements with in the past, a good friend, or just some random person. Happy New Year! May the 2016 go well for you.

Spread the New Year cheer by adding to their talk page with a Happy New Year message.


 * Thank you, . I love the rainbow colors. <b style="color:#070">Cullen</b><sup style="color:#707">328  Let's discuss it  04:50, 2 January 2016 (UTC)

Happy New Year, Cullen328!
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Happy New Year! Cullen328, Have a prosperous, productive and enjoyable New Year, and thanks for your contributions to Wikipedia. — k6ka  <span title="Canadian!" style="color:red">🍁 ( Talk ·  Contributions ) 17:33, 1 January 2016 (UTC)


 * Spread the WikiLove; use {{subst:Happy New Year 2016}} to send this message


 * By the way, did you know that this edit was the last edit made in 2015, and this is the first edit of 2016? (Times in UTC, of course). — k6ka  <span title="Canadian!" style="color:red">🍁 ( Talk ·  Contributions ) 17:33, 1 January 2016 (UTC)
 * UTC, of course, . Us Canadians and Americans must recognize that London is the center of the universe. Jimmy Wales lives there, after all. <b style="color:#070">Cullen</b><sup style="color:#707">328  Let's discuss it  04:54, 2 January 2016 (UTC)

Happy New Year, Cullen328!
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Happy New Year! Cullen328, Have a prosperous, productive and enjoyable New Year, and thanks for your contributions to Wikipedia. Liz <sup style="font-family:Times New Roman;"><b style="color:#006400;">Read!</b> <b style="color:#006400;">Talk!</b> 21:07, 1 January 2016 (UTC)


 * Send New Year cheer by adding {{subst:Happy New Year fireworks}} to user talk pages.


 * Thanks so much, . Let's write an article together some day. <b style="color:#070">Cullen</b><sup style="color:#707">328  Let's discuss it  04:59, 2 January 2016 (UTC)