User talk:Currytrain/sandbox

Nice analysis- it's interesting what draws the attention of editors. Jmmcabee (talk) 04:55, 18 April 2017 (UTC) jmmcabee

Comments on Ideas Draft
Nice analysis of the seed dispersal and dispersal pages. Sounds like both could use some work. I would probably avoid the use of words like diplochory on a Wikipedia page. You want to keep it accessible to a general reader. I think Wikipedia prefers using reviews for sources rather than separate primary sources for every example or bit of information. Looks like you found some good references for plant movement article. See comment above- you don't want too many references! Looks like there is a lot of restructuring and writing that could occur on the plant movement article. Jmmcabee (talk) 17:11, 26 April 2017 (UTC)jmmcabee

Comments on Article Revision
Great job! Looks like you are almost ready to go live. Make sure you know how to cite your sources properly. I like how you have organized your page. Makes it very easy to navigate. I may ask you to show your classmates tomorrow if you don't mind!

Jmmcabee (talk) 19:22, 10 May 2017 (UTC)jmmcabee

Peer Review ;)
Hellow! ♥ — Preceding unsigned comment added by Kamel24 (talk • contribs) 17:24, 16 May 2017 (UTC) Good paragraph! It was interesting to learn about the Sphagnum moss dispersal and overall the format of the article is great! ;D For the paragraph about Mimosa, I was a bit confused when you said "slower movement." I know you meant slower than the "extremely fast movement," but someone might think you mean tropism if they are unfamiliar with Mimosa and its mechanisms. Have a great weekend and see you on Tuesday! — Preceding unsigned comment added by Kamel24 (talk • contribs) 17:53, 18 May 2017 (UTC)