User talk:Curti485/Max Caulfield

You may find that when you take this live, other editors will object that the plot section is too detailed, or redundant to the main page for the game. Have you thought about how you might summarize even further if necessary? MNmagistra (talk) 21:10, 4 December 2021 (UTC)

Could you pull anything else out of your sources this week that could place this character in a larger context? Does she belong to a particular genre of young women in video games? Is she exceptional in any way that has been observed in reviews? Have any scholars written about this type of game, even if not specifically about this character? Right now, the page is primarily a plot summary — a very well done plot summary! — but I'd like to see you reach deeper. MNmagistra (talk) 21:16, 4 December 2021 (UTC)

Looks great, but I would try to add to the receptions of the character, or maybe some opinions fans and creators have of the main character. — Preceding unsigned comment added by Burve003 (talk • contribs) 04:03, 6 December 2021 (UTC)


 * Hi professor MNmagistra and others

Curti485, Shadycedars, Kizzardly, Donvonvononavan and Boodoll526. If you don't mind that me and other guy expanded the article Max Caulfield and placed some images. I'm happy in attempting to help again only if the students proceeds to nominate the article into GA. 118.106.111.141 (talk) 08:18, 12 December 2021 (UTC)