User talk:Cw6857a

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Peer review: CDA
Things are looking pretty good here! Looks like most things that should have citations/references are there. I suggest you clean up the notes if you can. Note 8 and 1 are the same. 5 doesn't have a hyperlink - not sure how important that is tho. Everything seems neutral. Wiki says it's too technical but it was digestible, this could be the result of familiarity with the subject tho.

I think the last paragraph on Fairclough 3 dimensional framework is the most important and useful information if someone is looking at wiki for this topic. So considering "who is looking' and "why", might change the organization of this page. It makes sense to have Background first but it's also not as important, but that's just my opinion. It's not a long article so it's not like someone has to sift around for any of the info. Instead of moving the suggested part toward the top, maybe adding a title or "bold" to part of the text could help direct the reader. LSislen (talk) 16:24, 25 February 2019 (UTC)