User talk:Cynthia00100/sandbox

empty sandbox

AMcClanan (talk) 21:01, 26 November 2018 (UTC)

Cynthia, your writing is clear and informative. Your work is cited by what looks to be good sources, and your spelling is great! You already have a decent amount of information included, but I would add links to other wikipedia articles within the writing so viewers can more easily understand the content. A picture might do nicely, too, but other than that, great job with your work so far! Rhiannon38 (talk) 03:35, 29 November 2018 (UTC)

Feedback from Prof McClanan, 12/7
It doesn't look like this was posted/revised, please email me if otherwise, thanks!

AMcClanan (talk) 22:53, 7 December 2018 (UTC)