User talk:Czc06wtu

Please do not add inappropriate external links to Wikipedia. Wikipedia is not a mere directory of links nor should it be used for advertising or promotion. Inappropriate links include (but are not limited to) links to personal web sites, links to web sites with which you are affiliated, and links that exist to attract visitors to a web site or promote a product. See the external links guideline and spam policies for further explanations of links that are considered appropriate. If you feel the link should be added to the article, then please discuss it on the article's talk page rather than re-adding it. See the welcome page to learn more about Wikipedia. Thank you. --Kuzaar-T-C- 15:17, 13 November 2006 (UTC)
 * Hello. Please understand that I understand you are wanting to improve the articles you've been editing, but in adding some of the links that you did, they do not appear to conform to Wikipedia's Reliable Source guidelines. Additionally, there were some minor concerns about whether your submissions were written from an entirely neutral point of view. Please review the links above and make sure you understand all that's there, and I'm sure you can incorporate your information into the main body of the articles. Sorry for any confusion. Happy editing, --Kuzaar-T-C- 15:24, 13 November 2006 (UTC)

i appreciate what you are saying - there just seems to be a perfect way you have to phrase something that i cant quite get.
 * Well, if you want to know the way I would phrase it, I would say that the claim you seem to have made earlier would be appropriate if you specifically attributed it to the publishers of the website you linked to, Labour behind the Label. For example: "According to X, a writer and fair labeling activist, the Monsoon Store chain's claim to this practice requires them to incorporate fair labeling practices throughout their chain of supply. (link to that site)". If you have any more questions you need answered, or advice, just write me at my talk page. Thank you. --Kuzaar-T-C- 15:40, 13 November 2006 (UTC)
 * Much better on that last submission. One last thing you might note is that it is generally frowned upon to add "controversy" sections- I went ahead and changed the title of the section to "fair labeling" to address the specific content of the section. Other than that, it looks just fine. Good job. --Kuzaar-T-C- 15:59, 13 November 2006 (UTC)