User talk:D'Catarina/sandbox

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There are some citation error. Gabrieledef96 (talk) 13:33, 11 December 2019 (UTC) What do you mean specifically? — Preceding unsigned comment added by D'Catarina (talk • contribs) 16:39, 12 December 2019 (UTC)

You did a really good job. Excellent idea to indicate the ∆G°. Do you think we need to add the names of reagents and products? In the original article have been indicated.

I would advise you to leave the original title, without adding "Litothrophic". It's a simple title to look for and the user may ignore that they are litotrophic bacteria. When you talk about the twisted stalk, I would suggest you to mention Mariprofundus ferrooxydans FabyRockPhoto (talk) 14:11, 13 December 2019 (UTC)

Hi Nilza,I have just read your article,i would like to give you some suggestions.This sentence isn't clear "Nevertheless some bacteria do not use the photoautotrophic Fe(II) oxidation metabolism for growth purposes [10] instead it's suggested that these groups are sensitive to Fe(II) ,therefore the oxidation of Fe(II) into more insoluble Fe(III) oxide to reduce its toxicity, enabling them to grow in the presence of Fe(II). - What do you mean for " withal contributing" ? For the rest i like it! — Preceding unsigned comment added by LeottaPaola (talk • contribs) 18:37, 13 December 2019 (UTC)