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 * Leave comments below! D.jae.lee (talk) 21:38, 19 January 2015 (UTC)

Peer-review

Hello! I'd be very happy if you'd be able to critique my current work in progress in my sandbox!

Mr. Senfai (talk) 16:30, 1 March 2015 (UTC)

Friendly Review
I think that the introduction is a little bit short. It should be a small summary of the protein in general. Maybe add a little bit more about what types of organisms it is found in?

Sohn.philip (talk) 17:52, 2 March 2015 (UTC)

Peer Suggestions
Hi, I was reading and I noticed you've done a lot of work so far! If you would like, I have a few suggestions:


 * Many references are missing from this article. The active site and mechanism section must include more citations prior to moving forward/submitting.
 * I think that the function,nomenclature, and structural studies sections should come before the active site and mechanism section, so that basic information on the protein is accessable earlier on before you get into the real meat of the article
 * I think it may be more useful to retitle "Structural studies" as "structure". Perhaps it may not be necessary to reveal/talk about studies? and instead write about the basic structures of these enzymes.
 * L. brevis was not italicized in "as the L.brevis xylose enzyme"
 * perhaps it may be more useful to put MW units into Daltons (Da)? It is usually more common to see proteins MWs presented in Daltons Da or kDa.
 * For researchers referenced in the text, perhaps it would be useful to cite where they performed their work? Eg. So and So from the University of Calgary or Millenium Pharmaceuticals (or the names could be omitted entirely).
 * Quick Catch: "eight alpha/beat barrels"(beta barrels)
 * Quick Catch: "holding two divalent magnsium ions* (magnesium)
 * Quick Catch: "share a acid residue" (an acidic residue)
 * Perhaps it may be useful to add a subheading to your active site and mechanism section, ie. ====active site structure ===== and a ===== mechanism===== so that its quicker for readers to find the information they need?
 * I'm not sure if you should leave it as is, or change it but: can you explain, or link to what an "open chain" conformation is? For carbohydrate chemistry.
 * When you say O2/O1, perhaps mention that this is on the sugar?
 * Perhaps mention where the hydride shift is occcurring (from which atom to which atom did the hydride originate and end up on)


 * Random: I did my undergrad degree in the same specialist.

Good luck!

Harris.qureshi (talk) 02:40, 11 March 2015 (UTC)