User talk:D1127p/sandbox

Janice's Peer Review Edit:
 * The grammar in first sentence should be: "The movie is based on real life events surrounding the 1987 June Democracy Movement, which brought about the end of the military regime of President Chun Doo-Hwan."
 * There could be better organization because it's a little confusing when you're talking about the June Democracy movement but it's all under plot so it's hard to distinguish what you're talking about.
 * A suggestion would be to have a subcategory for "Inspiration" or something along those lines.
 * Read through because there are a couple grammatical errors especially about sentence structure.
 * "Even after constant harassing from" should be "Even after constant harassment from".
 * For music, I think you'll need citations or even hyperlinks to their Wiki articles.
 * "Main" should be "Characters"(?)
 * Grammatical structure of each character description needs to be corrected.

Thank you for your review! I will definitely reread my article and correct the grammar. I will also take your other suggestions into consideration. D1127p (talk) 19:21, 1 December 2018 (UTC)