User talk:D3ini/sandbox

Hello Jeanie! This is an awesome article! You did a very thorough review of the topic, and made sure to reference to citations after every sentence. I liked that you linked to other pages for more information. Overall, the language that you used to describe voice masculinization was very clear and easy to understand. I especially liked that you separated the "Lowering Pitch" section with different headings. This made the information easy to navigate. I noticed that at the beginning of your article you have an equal distribution of citations. However, for the lowering pitch portion, most of the citations are from the one Adler, Hirsch, and Mordaunt (2012) source about therapy techniques. This section so far is heavily influenced by this article, so including other sources might be useful in not having it too one-sided. All in all, a great article! I will be using of the heading separation ideas for my own article, thanks!

H.hoangtn (talk) 18:15, 29 October 2016 (UTC)