User talk:DASHdoesit

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Your submission at Articles for creation
 Thank you for your recent submission to Articles for Creation. Your article submission has been reviewed. Unfortunately, it has not been accepted at this time. Please view your submission to see the comments left by the reviewer. You are welcome to edit the submission to address the issues raised, and resubmit once you feel they have been resolved.
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 * Thank you for your contributions to Wikipedia! Lugia2453 (talk) 22:45, 28 August 2012 (UTC)

September 2012
Welcome to Wikipedia. I noticed that the username you have chosen, "DASHdoesit", seems to imply that you are editing on behalf of a group, institution, company or website. Please note that Wikipedia does not allow usernames that are promotional or appear to be shared by multiple people. Please take a moment to create a new account or request a username change that represents only yourself as an individual. You should also read our conflict of interest guideline and remember that promotional editing is not acceptable regardless of the username you choose. If you believe that your username does not violate our policy, please leave a note here explaining why. Thank you. NTox · talk 00:36, 1 September 2012 (UTC)

Your submission at Articles for creation
 Thank you for your recent submission to Articles for Creation. Your article submission has been reviewed. Unfortunately, it has not been accepted at this time. Please view your submission to see the comments left by the reviewer. You are welcome to edit the submission to address the issues raised, and resubmit once you feel they have been resolved.
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 * Thank you for your contributions to Wikipedia! Kilopi (talk) 23:50, 7 September 2012 (UTC)

Wikipedia talk:Articles for creation/DASH
The first red flag I noticed when reviewing this was the "Early life" section. Most of this is unverifiable unless you are DASH (or his mother). As expected, I didn't see these claims confirmed in any of the independent sources I checked. In addition, it looks to be setting up the storyline of a hagiography, which is also not what we want. This is a common trap to fall into when writing about yourself or a subject very close to you. Sometimes it's permissible to use to cite what the subject says about himself (eg, birthdate and birthplace, musical influences, though for the latter, it might be better to explicitly attribute it like "In a 2012 interview with Artistdirect, DASH listed his musical influences as ... "), but most of the content, especially any parts that show notability, should be based on truly independent sources.

Also, some of it is not written in a neutral, encyclopedic manner. That in itself isn't a good reason to decline a submission since anyone can edit the page to correct it, but if moved to mainspace, you should expect a sentence like "DASH packed up and set out for the bright lights of New York City to continue pursuing his dream of becoming a solo sensation." to become, "DASH then moved to New York City to pursue his solo career."

If you want to resubmit, please read WP:BAND for the relevant notability criteria and WP:AMNESIA and Uncle G's essay for advice on how to avoid accidentally introducing unverifiable first-hand knowledge or personal bias. Kilopi (talk) 20:43, 12 September 2012 (UTC)

Your submission at Articles for creation
 Thank you for your recent submission to Articles for Creation. Your article submission has been reviewed. Unfortunately, it has not been accepted at this time. Please view your submission to see the comments left by the reviewer. You are welcome to edit the submission to address the issues raised, and resubmit once you feel they have been resolved.
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 * Thank you for your contributions to Wikipedia! avs5221(talk&#124;contrib) 19:34, 30 September 2012 (UTC)

Wikipedia talk:Articles for creation/DASH concern
Hi there, I'm HasteurBot. I just wanted to let you know that Wikipedia talk:Articles for creation/DASH, a page you created, has not been edited in at least 180 days. The Articles for Creation space is not an indefinite storage location for content that is not appropriate for articlespace.

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Your article submission DASH


Hello DASHdoesit. It has been over six months since you last edited your article submission, entitled DASH.

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Thanks for your submission to Wikipedia, and happy editing. 레비 Revi Discuss SUL Info 13:35, 23 November 2013 (UTC)