User talk:DAnthonyRocket/sandbox

Peer Reviews
This needs trimming down and to include Stenson, also include more citation framework from this course DoctorKarpiak (talk)

Tiffany's Peer Review

-Minor structural improvements can be made. Such as better word choices and some clarification on specific terms. -Section does however, have a strong lead regarding content and background about the very beginning of policing. -There is good flow from paragraph to paragraph. Appears to follow the lead from the beginning. 69.136.135.93 (talk) 20:56, 15 November 2018 (UTC)Tiffany Kerutis

Overall a good start. This section flows fairly well but does have some unneeded information added in. That should be trimmed down. The end starts to lose some of the flow. Needs to get some more things from the course added. Word choice could be improved as well. JSostakas (talk) 02:51, 16 November 2018 (UTC)