User talk:DDeane67217/sandbox

Draft Feedback
Hi This is an excellent draft! I made some small updates to your formatting to make it adhere to Wikipedia policy and renamed your headings to have them conform to typical Wikipedia article headings. I've got one or two (small) pieces of feedback for you.
 * You might want to trim the Selected Works (Publications) section to only show the most important publications. You can look at this article as a good template. This will add some balance to the article and allow the readers to focus on his most important work
 * You may also consider combining the legacy and career sections. This is up to you, but when I read it, they seemed to compliment each other enough to be the same section

After you're satisfied with your content, feel free to move it live! If you need any help, feel free to reach out and I can walk you through the process. Fantastic draft! Will (Wiki Ed) (talk) 20:28, 29 March 2021 (UTC)