User talk:DG14420/sandbox

This is just a start, remember you're supposed to aim for 300-500 words in a new entry. Also, stick with peer-reviewed sources as a marker of credibility/expertise (no random websites). Please repost by Nov. 29th and email me when the new version is up. thanks, ALMc AMcClanan (talk) 19:38, 25 November 2018 (UTC)

Feedback on full draft: Overall you've made great progress, and here are a few considerations for when you revise: Please touch base with any questions, I'm happy to help.
 * How will you integrate this material into the existing Glycon entry? For example, I can see it fitting into the Spread and Influence section perhaps, or becoming a new sub-head maybe?
 * two of the four sources are very outdated (it's okay that the Lucian trans. is early), which is especially problematic since research on your topic has changed considerably in recent decades. As you deepen your research, it might be possible to offer more material that goes beyond what's already in the entry.
 * remember to add in links to other Wikipedia entries, and overall adhere to the conventions of the context where the entry will be found

AMcClanan (talk) 19:26, 29 November 2018 (UTC)

From Prof McClanan, 12/7
This doesn't seem to be posted to the Glycon entry yet? How will it integrate w existing content? Please email when it's up.

AMcClanan (talk) 19:36, 7 December 2018 (UTC)