User talk:DTM2020UPRC

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Hello, DTM2020UPRC, and welcome to Wikipedia! My name is Ian and I work with Wiki Education; I help support students who are editing as part of a class assignment.

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Hi. The thing that jumps out most to me on your draft if your choice of sources. A lot of these sources don't meet Wikipedia's standards; as much as possible you should rely on peer reviewed sources or scholarly books. In addition, I would use the physiology article as a starting point instead of trying to recreate your own version from scratch. Ian (Wiki Ed) (talk) 15:48, 6 November 2020 (UTC)