User talk:D hiuconcordia/sandbox

Some nice work here, Diana, particularly in spotting the need for proper citing and a wikilink on The Colleen Bawn.

Overall, not quite enough work has gone into this part of the assignment – particularly in terms of recommending improvements to the content of the article, talking about the neutrality of the tone, and examining the nature of the sources.

Well done for leaving a comment on the talk page.

EmerOToole (talk) 17:06, 3 October 2018 (UTC)