User talk:Da1sy mermaid

May 2013
Hello, I'm Seaphoto. I noticed that you made a change to an article, Glorious Revolution, but you didn't provide a source. I’ve removed it for now, but if you’d like to include a citation to a reliable source and re-add it, please do so! If you think I made a mistake, or if you have any questions, you can leave me a message on my talk page. Thanks,  Sea photo Talk  23:29, 3 May 2013 (UTC)

Hi, Da1sy mermaid! Welcome to Wikipedia! I appreciate that you want to improve the Glorious Revolution article. However, your changes are not in line with Wikipedia rules. The beginning of an article, the lead section, must be a short abstract of the rest of the article. So you shouldn't move detailed information from the main text to the lead section: that makes it too long. If you feel that a certain key aspect isn't covered by the lead section, try to describe that point in a single sentence and add this at an appropriate place to the lead section.

Greetings, --MWAK (talk) 05:21, 4 May 2013 (UTC)