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 * Thank you for your contributions to Wikipedia! Tokyogirl79 (talk) 09:33, 9 December 2011 (UTC) The page needs a lot of work. First off, it needs more sources to prove that it meets WP:NFILM. Of the two sources you gave, one doesn't mention the film at all and the other is a site of dubious notability. Generally sources should come from sites that are very established, such as DreadCentral or HorrorNews.net. The first source only focused around Dourif and since notability is not inherited from him being in the film, the source doesn't need to be on the page. Also, several parts of the article were written in a non-neutral point of view, which should be avoided. It must be encyclopedic and not read like an opinion piece. I like Dourif, but not everyone else does and stating that his characters can be "unique, occasionally creepy, sometimes endearing" is more an opinion than a fact since not everyone shares this opinion. Unless you are quoting a horror review, things like this do not belong on the page. I'm actually sort of pulled to help edit the article, so you'll probably come back to see a lot of this changed around. Tokyogirl79 (talk) 09:33, 9 December 2011 (UTC)tokyogirl79

The article was created!
I just wanted to drop you a note to let you know that the page you worked on Death and Cremation was accepted as an entry after I worked on it some. I had asked a user who had previously declined the page to look over it to see if it met guidelines and it looks like it did. Just thought you'd like to know. :)Tokyogirl79 (talk) 07:31, 13 December 2011 (UTC)tokyogirl79