User talk:Dag Erik Hagesæter

Your submission at Articles for creation: West PC-800 (March 31)
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Dan arndt (talk) 12:14, 31 March 2019 (UTC)

West PC-800 draft
Hi, I see your draft is under review right now. If it is not accepted, will you mind if I adopt it and rewrite? Notability should not be a problem (magazine reviews look good) and bad English is no issue here (there are always good folks willing to "anglicize" our incomprehensible writting). Pavlor (talk) 05:42, 1 August 2019 (UTC)

Your submission at Articles for creation: West PC-800 (August 3)
 Your recent article submission to Articles for Creation has been reviewed! Unfortunately, it has not been accepted at this time. The reason left by MJL was:

The comment the reviewer left was:

Please check the submission for any additional comments left by the reviewer. You are encouraged to edit the submission to address the issues raised and resubmit when they have been resolved.


 * If you would like to continue working on the submission, go to Draft:West PC-800 and click on the "Edit" tab at the top of the window.
 * If you now believe the draft cannot meet Wikipedia's standards or do not wish to progress it further, you may request deletion. Please go to Draft:West PC-800, click on the "Edit" tab at the top of the window, add "db-self" at the top of the draft text and click the blue "publish changes" button to save this edit.
 * If you do not make any further changes to your draft, in 6 months, it will be considered abandoned and may be deleted.
 * If you need any assistance, you can ask for help at the [//en.wikipedia.org/w/index.php?title=Wikipedia:WikiProject_Articles_for_creation/Help_desk&action=edit&section=new&nosummary=1&preload=Template:Afc_decline/HD_preload&preloadparams%5B%5D=Draft:West_PC-800 Articles for creation help desk], on the [//en.wikipedia.org/w/index.php?title=User_talk:MJL&action=edit&section=new&nosummary=1&preload=Template:Afc_decline/HD_preload&preloadparams%5B%5D=Draft:West_PC-800 reviewer's talk page] or use Wikipedia's real-time chat help from experienced editors.

&#8211; MJL &thinsp;‐Talk‐☖ 17:38, 3 August 2019 (UTC)