User talk:Daiki Hiramori

WP:Manual of Style, and Welcome
Hello, Daiki Hiramori. I'm stopping by your talk page to inform you to keep WP:Manual of Style (obviously linked in this section's heading) in mind when you edit Wikipedia. For example, thus far, most of the tweaking I did to the Social construction of sex section you created in the Gender article was delinking some terms, per WP:OVERLINKING, and properly formatting quotes (there are different types of blockquotes that you can use). But looking at this edit in your sandbox, it appears that you are now aware of the overlinking issue...unless that edit is simply a result of you copying and pasting most of what was currently in the article into your sandbox and editing in/out new stuff.

On a side note, I am thinking about moving the "Social construction of sex" section higher; it seems like it should be placed higher, especially since it goes over a few things that are already mentioned higher in the article.

And, finally, since you are still a fairly new registered editor, I am presenting you with this Welcome template below. Flyer22 (talk) 07:52, 10 January 2013 (UTC)

--- Thank you for the Welcome template! Actually, I'm a Japanese and English is not my 1st language, nor am I good at editing wikipedia. I made this account because I'm a one-year exchange student at a university in the US and I took a course of women's studies that required editing wikipedia as a final exam. I am for moving the "Social construction of sex" section higher, although it is difficult for me to decide which place is good. Thank you for your comment. Daiki Hiramori (talk) 03:53, 10 February 2013 (UTC)