User talk:Daileymn/sandbox

Kile's Feedback
Your article seems to be very neutral and informative in nature. I would look back through your Wikipedia article links however seeing as all the ones that are highlighted in red don't actually have a Wikipedia article making it a useless link.CheeseBurgerDude79 (talk) 19:17, 24 October 2018 (UTC)

Deven's Feedback
Quite a good article with alot of information, but it could be improved with a photo of some kind. PowersD (talk) 19:19, 24 October 2018 (UTC)

julias feedback
the organization of this Is good but maybe some of the sections could be combined. you do a good job staying neutral too. keep expanding on the information to tell us why she is so important.

Changes Made based on feedback
I have removed the red links and combined some of the shorter sections. Daileymn (talk) 18:30, 26 October 2018 (UTC)