User talk:Daisuke 780

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Recommendations for Wader article
Daisuke 780, I looked at your article and overall it is very informative on not only the mechanisms of sexual dimorphism but also on the general overview of how waders function as a species. The only things I would really say that could be improved upon would be making sure that when you use complex scientific ideas, like polygamy or monogamy in the context of the birds, to be sure that you talk about them in such a way that anyone can read the article and understand it the way you meant it to be understood. Great job! Weightedswim94 (talk) 14:45, 25 October 2015 (UTC)