User talk:Daisy012/sandbox

Peer Review by Dabel Obikili
I enjoyed reading your page. I like the fact that you copied the whole Wikipedia page then added your own edits. I am really excited to see your final page. I like the way you broke it down into years and explained what happened in those years. I also like your use of bullet points to ensure a clear and concise explanation. However, I advise that you explain the points a little more, it could be as small as a sentence.

Cannot wait to see the final thing Dabel Obikili