User talk:DaliaFFH

Your submission at Articles for creation
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 * Thank you for your contributions to Wikipedia! Excirial ( Contact me, Contribs ) 20:44, 19 July 2012 (UTC)

Farid Fadel Article
Dear Excirial reviewer,

Greetings from Egypt! I have recently written an article about Egyptian artist Dr. Farid Fadel, however it did not go through. Here is the link you asked for : http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Wikipedia_talk:Articles_for_creation/Farid_Fadel

I made some amendments to have it written more academically, however I would appreciate more specific comments as to how I could make it "wikipedia" material. I would also like to include pictures I took of Dr. Farid Fadel's paintings but do not know how to do that. I assure you Excirial, Dr. Fadel is a worthy personage to have on wiki. His biography was included in the "Who's Who" of intellectuals published by Cambridge in 1988 and has been a key public figure in Egyptian contemporary art (do google him and see his paintings).

thank you for your cooperation and hard work.

I look forward to hearing from you soon.

yours truly,

Dalia — Preceding unsigned comment added by DaliaFFH (talk • contribs) 22:26, 21 July 2012 (UTC)


 * Those last few edits are definitely an improvement over the last versions, and as far as i am concerned entirely took care of the tone and neutrality issue. A few extra newspaper sources might be a good thing though, since a few of them only make a trivial mention, rather then providing a bit more substantial coverage. Having said that i'll be leaving it to another reviewer to do another check, but so far it looks quite decent to me. Excirial ( Contact me, Contribs ) 14:20, 23 July 2012 (UTC)

Your submission at Articles for creation
 Thank you for your recent submission to Articles for Creation. Your article submission has been reviewed. Unfortunately, it has not been accepted at this time. Please view your submission to see the comments left by the reviewer. You are welcome to edit the submission to address the issues raised, and resubmit once you feel they have been resolved.
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 * Thank you for your contributions to Wikipedia! Cyan  Gardevoir  (used EDIT!) 11:00, 26 July 2012 (UTC)