User talk:Dalmazo

Greetings
I look forward to seeing your 3-5 articles ideas, as well as a link to your critical evaluation of an existing Wikipedia article related to the class with suggestions for improving it on the article's discussion page. You can post those under this comment (make sure to add a semicolon to indent your comment to the right). Once you have posted these, please be sure to let me know on my talk page in the section I set up for these two assignments.--Theredproject (talk) 21:01, 21 September 2011 (UTC)


 * The two topics which I think would be good for the project are Jessica Helfand and Ed Benguiate. Both were on the designer list and since the people which wanted to do originally are taken, these are the next best thing.


 * Ed Benguiate was born into a artistic environment, on account of his father who was the display director for Bloomingdale. Benguiate studied at the school of visual arts, after a failed attempt at drawing he turned to layout design, typography, and calligraphy.  Once out of school Benguiate established an impressive career as a designer and art director at a number of large and small publishing houses, studios, and ad agencies. Benguiate did more than just design for the type face community, he played a critical part in the establishment of the International Typeface Corporation.


 * Jessica Helfand is a well known designer in the publishing industry. Jessica works in partnership with William Drenttel at Winterhouse, a design collaborative in New England focusing on publishing projects and new media.  Some of the big clients they have are The New Yorker, filmmaker Errol Morris, Yale University, American Masters/PBS and the National Design Awards.  she has written for numerous national publications including Aperture, Los Angeles Times Book Review and The New Republic, and has twice appeared on National Public Radio.  Dalmazo (talk) 01:42, 14 October 2011

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Sources for Jessica Helfand

 *  A site that shows an interview of Helfand.
 *  A site that gives a brief bio of Helfand and also gives links to other articles of her or by her.
 *  A site that gives you a bio, and also gives a list of books, essay, and critics by Helfand.
 *  A site that gives a small bio of Helfand.
 * Helfand, Jessica. Scrapbooks: An American History. New Haven: Yale University Press, 2008. Print.Dalmazo (talk) 15:39, 20 October 2011 (UTC)
 * make sure to put these on the talk page for the article.--Theredproject (talk) 00:29, 27 October 2011 (UTC)

Peer Review
I think you have an awesome start here! Some really good information and I love how the introduction contains alot of information. You have also cited sources really well. The only thing I would add would be maybe more categories about her and also maybe some galleries. Since she does scrapbooking I think it would be interesting to have a gallery of how her work has progressed over the years! however, your doing great! keep up the good work! :) (AleMarie (talk) 02:32, 1 December 2011 (UTC))

Copyright/self editing
Dalmazo, you should watch out for the contributions by the user JessicaHelfand for two reasons: 1. it is against WP rules to edit your own entry, and while anyone can create a username, it seems as if this might be Helfand herself, so you should think about the best way to address this. 2. The material that user JessicaHelfand is adding is copyrighted material from elsewhere. For example, her paragraph on Scrapbook comes from |here. -- I posted this on the article page as well, but I want to make sure you see it.--Theredproject (talk) 21:39, 4 December 2011 (UTC)

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