User talk:DaltonEngland/sandbox

Dalton-I really like the personal stuff about his life. I had trouble finding that in some of our references. But, I am glad you found it. Once we can get the specifics on his personal life I think it will make a really great start to a lead section. Marissa.bridgeman (talk) 04:15, 27 October 2016 (UTC)

Amy-I really like how yours flows. It's very informative, and really gets the point of sensation seeking across. I also liked how you mentioned the sensation-seeking scale. I think that is really important to mention. By combining parts of all of our lead sections I think we can make a really informative, and well written lead section. Marissa.bridgeman (talk) 04:18, 27 October 2016 (UTC)

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Nice work on your draft, but you really need to to fix the formatting on your references. Check out the Sources and Citations training if you need a refresher on how to add sources. Ian (Wiki Ed) (talk) 23:16, 6 December 2016 (UTC)