User talk:Damatucci

Hello, I'm Dorothy! (Damatucci (talk) 16:33, 25 September 2012 (UTC)damatucci)

Hello!
I'm very excited to see what you'll be developing. Yobi831 (talk) 16:39, 25 September 2012 (UTC)

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I, and the rest of the hosts, would be more than happy to answer any questions you have! SarahStierch (talk) 04:22, 10 October 2012 (UTC)

Page Review and Suggestions
Hi Dorothy, nice job so far!

You've added new parts and content to enrich the page and they fit in well, concise but comprehensive.

I can tell the original page is bit underdeveloped which requires lots of work. I guess you've figured out how to put it into a good shape and I'm looking forward to your final work. Here I just want to offer you several suggestions, see if they can offer additional help.

Since we've covered Organizational Information Theory in class, I recalled that there were background information concerning origin theories which have impact on OIT. You may have a background section.

Also we get familiar with assumptions of each theory before we dive into it. So you can have a assumption section or simply summarize them in the leading paragraph.

The main body looks fine to me. But examples to show applications of the theory are always welcomed. I'm sure you've found resources in your previous research. Last but not least, I think a longer reference list will make your page more credible. Don't forget to put internal links, which is easier to do and equally informative and valuable.

I know the coming weeks will become pretty busy for everyone, whereas we still need to make efforts to develop an inviting page. Let's stay energetic and get it done!

Stellalqx (talk) 02:53, 13 November 2012 (UTC)

Hi Dorothy! It looks like you've done a lot of work to build your page, which is fantastic! I think one way that you can improve your page would be to add more references - having a few more references will allow you to added more sections (which is something that Wikipedia looks for to consider an article "A- class"). Also, you might want to consider adding more to the "Utility of the Theory" section (however, I know these pages are works in progress). You have clearly made some significant edits to the page! Another thing to consider is that Wikipedia likes articles to have strong lead section; therefore, you might want to add more to the lead of the page. Furthermore, you might want to add some subsections to the page - since Wikipedia also views that as important to consider the page an "A-class" article. Overall, your page looks really good! Reinamg (talk) 04:51, 13 November 2012 (UTC)

File permission problem with File:Amatucci Profile Pic.jpg
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