User talk:DanaiPapadopoulos

Your submission at Articles for creation: Draft:Nadine Moussa (June 2)
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Concerns about Draft:Nadine Moussa
Hello, your draft Draft:Nadine Moussa is progressing, and I have helped fix some of the footnotes so both publisher and title are displayed, but the primary problem I'm seeing is that you appear to be using the page to advertise Moussa's platform rather than describe it. You spend a large portion of the article directly quoting her campaign promises, which makes it sound like an endorsement. I would strongly suggest that you take those two large sections and trim them back to just a paragraph or so describing what her election platforms are, adding footnotes not to her own sources, but to journalism sources which have examined and analyzed her campaign promises. That should bring the article sufficient neutrality to potentially publish. MatthewVanitas (talk) 15:18, 4 June 2014 (UTC)

Your submission at AfC Nadine Moussa was accepted
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