User talk:DanakaRobertson/sandbox

Hi Danaka,

The Wikipedia entry is good so far, I would just extend your information as I find there isn't enough information for the assignment. Also, make sure you are capitalizing all names in your organization, I edited one of them. It is a good start, I would just extend your information and maybe break up the article into more subsections and make sure you are citing everything correctly. I believe this will be a strong article if you just continue to give more details regarding your NGO.

Ealish HIS229 (talk) 14:35, 15 April 2018 (UTC) Ali Davies

Second edit
Hi Danaka,

The new editions are good, I would just extend and add more information to the subheadings, like activities and other human rights issues. So far the page looks good, but I would just add more information to what you have now. Ealish HIS229 (talk) 17:24, 19 April 2018 (UTC)Ali Davies